My homework

2019-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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My weakness in English is speaking and writing including grammar. I think that I\'m very confident in reading, but a little in listening. Especailly, I have a habit of changing korean into English. I heard that it\'s very bad method to study language. As you can see on my level test report, I usually speak short sentences using limeted expressions. I watched a video of You-tube on the subject of studying english last saturday, and the people said that have to input many vocabularys and patterns of expression, after that I could speak well. To improve my speaking and writing in english, how do I study ? Could you advise for me? Have a good night!

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for doing your first homework today! I had fun reading it. You were able to express yourself through writing. Until the next one! See you tomorrow! :)

And to answer your question:
I think the best way for you to learn English is to apply it. Have a lot of free talking and conversations with a lot of people who can speak English well. Also, never hesitate to talk with a foreigner on the street.
I also think that having a lot of vocabularies is really important but you have to use it those vocabularies for you to know when to use it and where to use it. One good way to expand your vocabulary is through reading English books. I do recommend that you shouldn\'t translate it in Korean but have to use it in a sentence to get the meaning of the unfamiliar words.
One effective method I used that I think is listening to English music. It helps in improving listening skill but we should not just listen to it but also have to learn a lot of words from it. If possible, you can sing along with the singer.
I hope these methods help you. :)

~Teacher Sheila :)

My weakness in English is speaking and writing including grammar.
>>My weaknesses in English are speaking and writing including grammar.

I think that I\'m very confident in reading, but a little in listening.
>>I think I\'m very confident in reading but a little bit in listening.
OR>>I think I\'m very confident in reading but I\'m not that confident in listening.

Especailly, I have a habit of changing korean into English. 
>>Especially. I have a habit of changing words into Korean from English.
OR>>Especially, I have a habit of translating English words into Korean.

I heard that it\'s very bad method to study language.
>>I hear that it\'s a very bad method to study a language.

As you can see on my level test report, I usually speak short sentences using limeted expressions.
>>As you can see on my level tests report, I usually speak short sentences using limited expressions.

I watched a video of You-tube on the subject of studying english last saturday, and the people said that have to input many vocabularys and patterns of expression, after that I could speak well.
>>I watched a video on YouTube on the subject of studying English last Saturday and the people said that I have to input a lot of vocabularies and patterns of expressions, after that I could speak well.
OR>>I watched a video on YouTube on the subject of studying English last Saturday and the people said that I have to use a lot of vocabularies and patterns of expressions, after that I could speak well.

To improve my speaking and writing in english, how do I study ?
>>To improve my speaking and writing in English, how do I study?

Could you advise for me?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Could you give me an advice?
OR>>Do you have any advice for me?

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