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2019-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Hi Teacher, Good morning~Have a happy day~~^^ When I meet new people, I always feel nervous. Because of it, I don\'t like a new meeting. The feeling gave me a stress. I don\'t know what I say in the meeting unexpectedly. Neverthless If I have to get new meeting, I try to forget my problem and job to prepare new people. And I concentrate to them with smile to do chance some question for their life. I also prepare my clothes to show a good image. And I try to enjoy the mood.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! I wish that you have wonderful day, as well. I think that everyone gets nervous when meeting people.  We just have to be sincere when we meet them. Keep smiling! -T.Dee


When I meet new people, I always feel nervous.

>>CORRECT!

Because of it, I don\'t like a new meeting.

>>Because of it, I don\'t like meeting new people.

>>OR:  Because of it, I don\'t feel comfortable whenever I meet new people.

The feeling gave me a stress. I don\'t know what I say in the meeting unexpectedly.

>>It makes me feel stressed.  I don\'t know what to say in the first meeting especially when it is unexpected.

Neverthless If I have to get new meeting, I try to forget my problem and job to prepare new people.

>>Nevertheless if I have to meet a new acquaintance, I try to forget things about my problems or my job and I just think about meeting the new person.

And I concentrate to them with smile to do chance some question for their life.

>>I keep my attention to them and I greet them with a smile. I take the chance to ask them about their lives.

I also prepare my clothes to show a good image.

>>I also prepare my clothes to make a good impression.

And I try to enjoy the mood.

>>And, I just try to enjoy the moment.

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