My homework~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]! I wish that you have wonderful day, as well. I think that everyone gets nervous when meeting people. We just have to be sincere when we meet them. Keep smiling! -T.Dee
When I meet new people, I always feel nervous.
>>CORRECT!
Because of it, I don\'t like a new meeting.
>>Because of it, I don\'t like meeting new people.
>>OR: Because of it, I don\'t feel comfortable whenever I meet new people.
The feeling gave me a stress. I don\'t know what I say in the meeting unexpectedly.
>>It makes me feel stressed. I don\'t know what to say in the first meeting especially when it is unexpected.
Neverthless If I have to get new meeting, I try to forget my problem and job to prepare new people.
>>Nevertheless if I have to meet a new acquaintance, I try to forget things about my problems or my job and I just think about meeting the new person.
And I concentrate to them with smile to do chance some question for their life.
>>I keep my attention to them and I greet them with a smile. I take the chance to ask them about their lives.
I also prepare my clothes to show a good image.
>>I also prepare my clothes to make a good impression.
And I try to enjoy the mood.
>>And, I just try to enjoy the moment.
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