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Hello Miss [이름]! Eating together makes good family relationship better, in my opinion. It\'s good to know that you make certain adjustments for each member of your family when you eat out. Have more fun moments together!~T.Dee
I don\'t like eating at buffets.
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It is because I don\'t eat variety foods.
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So I like to go to a specialty store.
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For example, they are some steak or sushi and Korean cold noodles....^^.
>>For example, there are some restaurants which serve steak or sushi or Korean cold noodles.
My husband\'s taste is similar with my taste so we can choice a store easily.
>>My husband\'s taste is similar with my taste so we can easily choose where we will dine.
But my children are different with taste each other.
>>But, my children have different taste preferences.
So my family like to go to a buffets in our birthday.
>>So my family like to go to buffets when it\'s someone\'s birthday.
When we went to a buffet which is a wedding buffet which takes an 1 hour from my home.
>> Once, when we went to a buffet prepared for a wedding, we had to drive for 1 hour from my home.
There were variety foods.
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And It was bigger than my hometown\'s restaurant.
>>It was also bigger than my hometown\'s restaurant.
I ate freshly baked steaks and craps and many kind of sushi. I am looking forward my birthday.
>>I ate freshly baked steaks and crabs and many kinds of sushi. I am looking forward to my birthday.
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