My homework

Hello Miss [이름]! Having a long hair is indeed a hassle. Keep it according to how you like it but be patient with it. ^^_T.Dee

I have a longish hair style of brown color with shaggy cut.

>>I have a quite long hair with brown color with a shaggy cut.

>>OR: My hair is quite long with a shaggy style haircut and it is dyed brown.

So It is enough if It takes at 30 minutes. 

>>So, it\'s enough that I take only 30 minutes to fix it.

Even although a longish hair is not good to me, I prefer a longish hair to bobbed hair style. 

>>Even though,  having a long hair is not good for me, I still prefer to have a long or bobbed hair style. 

I got a hot temper.

>>CORRECT!

I have a longish hair to learn to be more patient. And it is trend.^^

>>I keep a long hair to learn to be more patient. And, because it is the trend.^^