my homework~^^

2020-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.i feel better when i am with my family. 2.i feel good when i get a birthday present. 3.i feel better when i play dodge ball. 4.praise makes me feel better.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sophia!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

1.i feel better when i am with my family.

>> I feel better when I am with my family.
2.i feel good when i get a birthday present.

>> I feel good when I get a birthday present.
3.i feel better when i play dodge ball.

>> I feel better when I play dodgeball.
4.praise makes me feel better.

>> Receiving a praise makes me feel better.

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