my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Essay: If you could prepare a Korean dish for your foreign friends, what would it be and why?
I want to invite foreign friends in my town
I want to introduce my country and try Korean food for them
If I could happen that, I would recommend traditional Korean food like above a picture, Hansic in Korean.
It come out different side dishes so they can enjoy various tastes and have a variety of nutrients
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
That\'s a nice photo of different kinds of food and it\'s making me hungry. Maybe I should visit your country one time, so I could taste all of the ones in the photo. ^^
-Rachel
I want to invite foreign friends in my town.
>> correct
I want to introduce my country and try Korean food for them
>> I want to introduce my country and let them try Korean foods.
If I could happen that, I would recommend traditional Korean food like above a picture, Hansic in Korean.
If I could happen that, I would recommend traditional Korean food like above a picture, Hansic in Korean.
>> If I could, I would recommend them to try traditional Korean fodds like the ones in the picture above. They are called Hansic in Korean.
It come out different side dishes so they can enjoy various tastes and have a variety of nutrients
>> It comes with different side dishes, so they can enjoy various tastes and dishes and get a lot of nutrients.
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