my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
Essay: If you could dine with your country\'s President in a restaurant, and he asks you to order food for him, what would you order and why?
It\'s impossible for me to dine with my country\'s President ^^
I wish it would happen like that
If I could , I would order traditional food of my town such as Hansic
He could feel our life , culture,,,, etc
Because our food is made of famous ingredients that produce from my town
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Hi [이름]!
It would really be nice if you could dine in with your country\'s President. It would be a great opportunity to tell him your concerns and listen to his plans for the country. I wish it would happen. ^^
-Rachel
It\'s impossible for me to dine with my country\'s President ^^
>> correct
I wish it would happen like that
I wish it would happen like that
>> correct
If I could , I would order traditional food of my town such as Hansic
If I could , I would order traditional food of my town such as Hansic
>> If I could, I would order traditional foods from my town such as Hansik.
He could feel our life , culture,,,, etc
He could feel our life , culture,,,, etc
>> So he could feel our life and culture.
Because our food is made of famous ingredients that produce from my town
Because our food is made of famous ingredients that produce from my town
>> Because our food is made of famous ingredients produced in my hometown.
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