My homework & contents in class

Hi there [이름],

Don\'t forget to put punctuation marks on your sentences. Drink lots of tea and warm water. Hopefully, you\'ll be completely fine by Wednesday. See you then!(\",)

~Lynn

My hobby is swimming.^^

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 I\'ve swum in pool in the gym near my home three or four times a week for 5years

>> I\'ve been swimming in the pool in the gym near my home three or four times a week for five years.
 It makes me feel better , keep in shape , treat my allergy, hang out with many people^^

>>  It makes me feel better, keep  me in shape, treat my allergy,  and I can hang out with many people.
 That\'s why I\'ve tried to swim ^^

>> That\'s why I\'ve tried swimming.
 I want to recommend you to swim when you have free time^^
>> I want to recommend to you to swim when you have free time.
I\'ve heard Bolivia in South Ameria but I\'m not interested in there so far 

>> I\'ve heard that Bolivia is in South Ameria but I\'m not interested to go there so far.
 I search it on Internet now ^^

>> I\'ve search it on the internet just now.
 Landlocked Bolivia is virtual showcase of South America\'s most dramatic landscapes.

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OR>> It says that, landlocked Bolivia is virtual showcase of South America\'s most dramatic landscapes. 
 It offers a number of adventure activities including moutain biking called dead road, salt flat tour, and jungle expeditions.

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 It\'s amazing! ^^

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 Let\'s call it a day.^^ Thank you.^^

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