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I think if I don’t make an enough effort, I can’t achieve my goal. However, I’m not sure that I will achieve my dream even if I do my best for my aim. I guess I need to good luck and timing for my success. Nowadays, we hear a lot of news about business depression in the world. This crisis will not be solved well for a while. So, many younger students can’t find a valuable job even if they have studied hard in University and finished internship. Unfortunately some students can get a job, but it is not valuable or no related their dream or major. The reason why they can’t find a job is not related their effort. Before 20 years, person who graduate university easily entered big company or found a job related their major, and they got comparatively much salary and lots of chance for promotion. Of course, when they opened their business, they could get success if they did their best and had a valuable item. Well, at that time, they got a lot of chance to earn big money and achieve their dream because it was the era of growth of Korea economy. Therefore, I think we have to strive and do our best for our aim, but it’s not enough. We need to a little luck and good timing for success. I was melting on weekend. It was really so hot and sultry!! I hope it will be cold early. Anyway, my work dispatch is not decided yet. My boss in headquarter does not want to send me there. I’m disappointed about that. Already I have readied about that! Anyway, See you!

Mr. [이름], I think you are really disappointed this time. I hope your boss can change his mind. Please do not feel bad if things do not go as what you have plan. As what I have said before, you should always prepare a plan if things do not work as you want.Let\'s just see the bright side from this sudden change of plan. Hope to hear your voice later. T.Sheela I think if I don’t make an enough effort, I can’t achieve my goal. >> I think I am not doing enought effort to achieve my goal. However, I’m not sure that I will achieve my dream even if I do my best for my aim. >> Correct! >>However, I am not sure if i will be able to achieve my dream even if I do my best. I guess I need to good luck and timing for my success. >> I guess I need a good luck and timing to be successful.Nowadays, we hear a lot of news about business depression in the world. >> Correct! >>Nowadays, we hear a lot of news about business depression around the world. This crisis will not be solved well for a while. >> This crisis won\'t be easily solved. >>This kind of crisis will not be solved for awhile. So, many younger students can’t find a valuable job even if they have studied hard in University and finished internship. >> Correct! >>OR So, many graduates can’t find a valuable job even if they have studied hard during their University years and finished their internship. Unfortunately some students can get a job, but it is not valuable or no related their dream or major. >> Unfortunately some newly graduates can get a job which is valuable or related to their dream or major. The reason why they can’t find a job is not related their effort. >> The reason why they can’t find a job is not because they don\'t exert effort. Before 20 years, person who graduate university easily entered big company or found a job related their major, and they got comparatively much salary and lots of chance for promotion. >>20 years ago, person who graduated from a university can easily entered a big company or found a job related to their major, and they can get an incomparable high salary and lots of chance for promotion. Of course, when they opened their business, they could get success if they did their best and had a valuable item. >> Of course, when they opened their business, they can get successful if they did their best and valued it. Well, at that time, they got a lot of chance to earn big money and achieve their dream because it was the era of growth of Korea economy. >> Well, at that time, they had a lot of chances to earn big money and achieve their dream because it was the era wherein Korea\'s economy was growing.Therefore, I think we have to strive and do our best for our aim, but it’s not enough. >> Therefore, I think we have to strive hard and do our best to achieve our goal in life , but it’s not enough. We need to a little luck and good timing for success. >> Correct!I was melting on weekend. >>I felt like I was melting last weekend. It was really so hot and sultry!! I hope it will be cold early. >> It was really so hot and sultry!! I hope it will be cold soon.Anyway, my work dispatch is not decided yet. >> Anyway, my work dispatch has not been decided yet. My boss in headquarter does not want to send me there. >> My boss in the headquarter does not want me to be send in there. I’m disappointed about that. >> Correct! Already I have readied about that! Anyway, See you! >>I have already deadied about that! Anyway, See you!