my homework in 10, Jul

We never stop exploring space. It is the instinct of human which for challenging to new one. Human have endless desire for new something as they explored Africa, so many highest mountains like Everest as well as the polar region and deep sea. Anybody can’t stop their desire and passion for challenging. Also, good or bad ambition of advanced nations like U.S.A, Russia, Euro and China will make that they spend more time and a lot of money to exploring and conquest space. However, anybody can’t guarantee of their result. Can they find the new planet like ours in several decades? And then, can we move there and live? I’m not sure about that. I think that managing our planet is more important than to find new planet. Therefore we have to protect and preserve our planet. While the last several decades, the earth was injured a lot by thoughtless development and exploitation of human. We can’t know about limit of patient of our planet. If the earth can’t endure about human’s wrong behavior, we may go through huge disaster. It may come after 100 years or just next month as prophecy. Anyone can’t ensure about that. So, we have to reduce environment pollution, thoughtless development and expansion of human world. We can’t stop exploring space and I think it is necessary for mankind. Of course, Protecting and preserving of the earth is necessary, too. They are not a matter of choice. We have to do well about that for our future and the present.

Hello Mr. [이름], I think you were not busy at work today. Thank you for having time to do your homework yesterday. I got a little bit confuse to what you mean in sentence no. 3. I hope that my corrections did not entirely change what you mean. Please have time to read my corrections and if my corrections is not the same to what you mean. Please explain your thoughts in our class tonight. See you! T.Sheela We never stop exploring space. >>Correct! It is the instinct of human which for challenging to new one. >>It is the instinct of humans to face new challenges. Human have endless desire for new something as they explored Africa, so many highest mountains like Everest as well as the polar region and deep sea. >>Humans have an endless desire for something new as they want to explore Africa for there are many high mountains like Mt. Everest as well as polar regions and deep seas. Anybody can’t stop their desire and passion for challenging. >>Anyone can’t stop their desire and passion for new challenges. Also, good or bad ambition of advanced nations like U.S.A, Russia, Euro and China will make that they spend more time and a lot of money to exploring and conquest space. >>Also, a good or bad ambition of advanced nations like U.S.A, Russia, Euro and China will spend more time and lots of money to explore and conquer space. However, anybody can’t guarantee of their result. >>However, no one can’t guarantee the result. Can they find the new planet like ours in several decades? >>Correct! And then, can we move there and live? I’m not sure about that. >>Correct! I think that managing our planet is more important than to find new planet. >>Correct! Therefore we have to protect and preserve our planet. >>Correct! While the last several decades, the earth was injured a lot by thoughtless development and exploitation of human. >>In the past several decades, the earth was injured by a lot of thoughtless development and exploitation of humans. We can’t know about limit of patient of our planet. If the earth can’t endure about human’s wrong behavior, we may go through huge disaster. >>We do not know the limit of patient of our planet. If the earth can’t endure all human’s wrong behavior, we may go through a huge disaster. It may come after 100 years or just next month as prophecy. >>It may come after 100 years or just next month as prophecy says. Anyone can’t ensure about that. >>Correct! So, we have to reduce environment pollution, thoughtless development and expansion of human world. >>Correct!We can’t stop exploring space and I think it is necessary for mankind. >>Correct! Of course, Protecting and preserving of the earth is necessary, too. >>Correct! They are not a matter of choice. >>Correct! We have to do well about that for our future and the present. >>Correct!