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Of course! Many people get a big advantage and profit by their cheating, on the other hand many people take a huge damage by someone’s cheating. There’re so many cheating in business, law as well as in an examination. We are experienced the first cheating in an examination when we are student, but it’s just kidding. Many students will be experienced worse cheating in society. First of all, nowadays, many people can’t find a good job even if they have nice ability, but if someone has connection with person who locate high level position in company, it’s not difficult to enter the company even though have no ability. And, some businessman cleverly exploit legal loophole to get tax avoidance or expand their business. The knowledgeless and honest man always works hard for their family, but they just earn little money. They never escape their unhappy load. However, the crafty, dishonest and rich man always gets lots of money easily to take advantage of cheating. So, poor man will be a more poor man, rich man will be a more rich man. And then, if they have political power, it’s a hell. They get big profit by hook or crook. They can change the law for their money, they can use government power for their advantage and they can extort business whatever they want. Well, if cheating would disappear, the honest man can escape his poor according to his effort, and everyone believes each other and government. Every people will think ‘I can get my life what I want, if I do my best’.

Mr. [이름], I am happy that you had time to do you homework. I think you were bored at work that you did your past homework. Here are my corrections.:) T.Sheela Of course! Many people get a big advantage and profit by their cheating, on the other hand many people take a huge damage by someone’s cheating. >>>Of course! Many people get a big advantage and profit from cheating.On the other hand many people suffer a huge damage from cheaters. There’re so many cheating in business, law as well as in an examination. >>>Correct. We are experienced the first cheating in an examination when we are student, but it’s just kidding. >> We had our first experience in cheating in our examination when we were students, but it was just for fun. Many students will be experienced worse cheating in society. >> Many students will be experiencing the worse way of cheating in the society. >>OR Many students will experience cheating in the society. First of all, nowadays, many people can’t find a good job even if they have nice ability, but if someone has connection with person who locate high level position in company, it’s not difficult to enter the company even though have no ability. >> Nowadays, many people can not find a good job even if they are highly qualified to the position. But if someone has a connection or known someone who has a high position in the company, it won\'t be difficult on them to get the job despite their incapabilities. And, some businessman cleverly exploit legal loophole to get tax avoidance or expand their business. >>>Correct. The knowledgeless and honest man always works hard for their family, but they just earn little money. >> The innocent and honest man always works hard for their family, but they earn little amount of money. They never escape their unhappy load. >> They never escape poverty. However, the crafty, dishonest and rich man always gets lots of money easily to take advantage of cheating. >> However, the crafty and dishonest rich man always gets lots of money easily by taking advantage of cheating. So, poor man will be a more poor man, rich man will be a more rich man. >>So, poor man will become poorer and rich man will become richer. And then, if they have political power, it’s a hell. >> Correct! They get big profit by hook or crook. >>They get big profit by hook or by crook. They can change the law for their money, they can use government power for their advantage and they can extort business whatever they want. >> They can change the law by their money, they can use the government power for their advantages and they can extort business whenever they want. Well, if cheating would disappear, the honest man can escape his poor according to his effort, and everyone believes each other and government. >> Well, if cheating will disappear, the honest man can escape poverty according to his effort and everyone will trust each other and also the government. Every people will think ‘I can get my life what I want, if I do my best’. >> Every people will think that they can have the life they want if they do their best.