my homework in 11, Jun

2012-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Use the following words in a sentence. Console/Requital/Crave/Regime/Elucidation There is a little Comfort Woman who lives yet in Asia. They had been suffered huge pain by Japanese soldiers while World War 2. Nowadays, a lot of nations and people have consoled them with a monument to the memory and commemorated events in the world. However, what they really crave is elucidation of severe action and requital of Japanese government. Nevertheless, any Japanese regimes in the past didn’t do it ever. They have argued that it was the voluntary participation themselves. Rather then, they ask demolition of monument to memory to nation which has them. For instance, in this year, some Japanese assemblymen visit one of the city nearby Washington in USA, they asked demolition of monument to memory to City Council. Of course, The City Council didn’t accept their argument. Many people of Asia nations got angry about Japanese government for such as reasons. I think it is not good for peace of Asia. Japanese regime has to apologize for happening in the past to Asia nations and compensate for psychological and physical pain as what German did. It’ll make trust and peace in Asia. My cheerful teacher Sheela. I have a plan to meet my friend who has worked in Singapore at this evening. So, perhaps, I can’t come back on class time. If I don’t join at skype on time, don’t wait me. Enjoy your tea time, please. Anyway, have a good afternoon!

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Mr.[이름], Have fun tonight! I think you really deserve to have fun this time. I actually, I feel bad today but I hope you\'ll be around tomorrow to listen to me. I will feel better once I open it up to you. But, Please have fun tonight! See you! T.Sheela Use the following words in a sentence.Console/Requital/Crave/Regime/Elucidation There is a little Comfort Woman who lives yet in Asia. >> There is a little Comfort Woman who lives in Asia. >>OR There are few Comfort Woman who lives in Asia. They had been suffered huge pain by Japanese soldiers while World War 2. >>They had suffered a severe pain from the Japanese soldiers during World War 2. Nowadays, a lot of nations and people have consoled them with a monument to the memory and commemorated events in the world. >>Nowadays, a lot of nations and people have consoled them with a monument in memory and commemoration of the past events they had experience in this world. However, what they really crave is elucidation of severe action and requital of Japanese government. >>Correct! Nevertheless, any Japanese regimes in the past didn’t do it ever. >>Correct! They have argued that it was the voluntary participation themselves. >>They said that it was a voluntary participation of them. Rather then, they ask demolition of monument to memory to nation which has them. >>Instead, they asked the demolition of the monument which was put up for them by the nation. For instance, in this year, some Japanese Assemblymen visit one of the city nearby Washington in USA, they asked for the demolition of the monument to memory to City Council. >>For instance,this year, some Japanese assemblymen visit one of the city nearby Washington in USA, they asked demolition of monument to the City Council. Of course, The City Council didn’t accept their argument. >> Correct! Many people of Asia nations got angry about Japanese government for such as reasons. >>Many Asia nations got angry to the Japanese government for their reasons. I think it is not good for peace of Asia. >> I think it is not good to have peace in Asia. Japanese regime has to apologize for happening in the past to Asia nations and compensate for psychological and physical pain as what German did. >>Japanese regime has to apologize for what happened in the past to the Asia nations and compensate for psychological and physical pain as what German did. It’ll make trust and peace in Asia. >> It will bring trust and peace in Asia.My cheerful teacher Sheela. >> Correct!I have a plan to meet my friend who has worked in Singapore at this evening. >> I have a plan to meet my friend who work in Singapore this evening. So, perhaps, I can’t come back on class time. >> Correct! If I don’t join at skype on time, don’t wait me. >> If I were not able to be online at Skype, Don\'t wait for me. Enjoy your tea time, please. Anyway, have a good afternoon! >> Correct! >>OR Please enjoy your tea time and have a good Afternoon!

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