my homework in 11, May
학생이 쓴 원문
1. One child with no wear ran all over town
2.There is the red and blue chair
3. His father is the famous chef from your favorite television show
4. I walked in the rain at last night.
5. My dog swam two miles
강사 첨삭
Wonderful! I\'m impressed with how well you constructed your sentences. Do be careful with your prepositions though and try to complete the thought of your sentence. Anyway, I\'ll talk to you later.
T. Sheela
1. One child with no wear ran all over town
>>One child with no clothes ran all over town. OR
>>Bob and Bill ran all over town.2.There is the red and blue chair
>>There is the red and blue chair you\'ve been looking for. OR
>>The red and blue chair looks gorgeous in your living room!3. His father is the famous chef from your favorite television show
>>Correct! OR
>>The famous chef from your favorite television show just baked an apple pie.4. I walked in the rain at last night.
>>I walked in the rain last night. OR
>>The rain made everything beautiful.5. My dog swam two miles
>>Correct!
>>My crazy dog just swam two miles!
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