my homework in 12, Jun
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I think that dyslexia is a disability which we have to take care and treat.
In the past, we didn’t know that the dyslexia is disability, so many people deal with people who has the dyslexia like spastic person. However, we realized the dyslexia is the one of disability according to many researches. So, nowadays, our government and many people who belong with education try to inform that the dyslexia is a disability
And then, we have to help someone who has the dyslexia to treat well. If we don’t help them, they will go through a bad situation as they are treated as an outcast or they are suffered a school violence. We have to take care of them with a warm heart.
Sorry, Sheela. I couldn’t join a last class because I was very tired yesterday, so I had to sleep early.
Why I feel more tired than before, I guess that I stopped to eat a ginseng essence before 2 weeks.
Maybe, I should restart to eat them from next week.
Anyway, I’ll join a today class on time. See you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름],
I think you really have to start eating the ginseng essence since it will help you not to sleep early.:) i\'ll see you later!
T.Sheela
I think that dyslexia is a disability which we have to take care and treat.
>>I think that dyslexia is a disability which needed a treatment and care. In the past, we didn’t know that the dyslexia is disability, so many people deal with people who has the dyslexia like spastic person.
>>Correct!
However, we realized the dyslexia is the one of disability according to many researches.
>>However, we have realized that dyslexia is a disability according to many researches.
So, nowadays, our government and many people who belong with education try to inform that the dyslexia is a disability
>>So, nowadays, our government and other people who belongs to educational system tries to inform that dyslexia is a disability.And then, we have to help someone who has the dyslexia to treat well.
>> And then, we have to help the one who has a dyslexia and treat it well.
If we don’t help them, they will go through a bad situation as they are treated as an outcast or they are suffered a school violence.
>> If we don’t help them, they will go through a bad situation as they are treated as an outcast or they suffered a school violence.
We have to take care of them with a warm heart.
>> Correct! Sorry, Sheela. I couldn’t join a last class because I was very tired yesterday, so I had to sleep early.
>> Sorry, Sheela. I did not join the last class because I was very tired yesterday, so I had to sleep early. Why I feel more tired than before, I guess that I stopped to eat a ginseng essence before 2 weeks.
>> Why do I feel more tired than before?,I guess that is because I stopped eating a ginseng essence 2 weeks before.Maybe, I should restart to eat them from next week.
>> Maybe, I should restart to eat them starting next week. Anyway, I’ll join a today class on time. See you!
>> Anyway, I’ll join today\'s class on time. See you!
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