my homework in 13, Apr
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Sally was driving _ 90 kilometers per hour. by
2.Did you stay _ friends? with
3.No, I stayed _ a hotel. at
4.My house is _ the sea. by
5.I usually go to school _ bus. by
6.They have a big collection of paintings _ Picasso. by
7. Have you seen any plays _ William Shakespeare. by
8.Do you take tea _ milk and sugar? with
9.Who is the man _ the sunglasses on? with
10.Water boils _ 100 centigrade. at
Oh! Sheela. Sorry. I felt so tired on yesterday indeed (you know, yesterday is Monday!), so after my light dinner, I lay down in my bed. Usually I used to get up after 1 hour, but I couldn’t wake up at last night. I don’t know why. I’m going to guess my body wanted a long relaxation.
Nowadays, I have been confused by my several problems which are studying English, my goal of life, money, my job, what I really want and something like that. I think they have made me more tired than usual. Anyway, I am sure that we can have funny conversation at tonight. See you!
강사 첨삭
Mr.[이름],
Don\'t worry about it. It was good that you were able to rest well last night. You needed to recover your energy as well to perform well at work. Awesome job by the way on your homework. Two thumbs up! ^^ Talk to you later!
T.Sheela
1.Sally was driving _ 90 kilometers per hour. by
>>a. at2.Did you stay _ friends? with
>>c. with3.No, I stayed _ a hotel. at
>>Correct!4.My house is _ the sea. by
>>Correct!5.I usually go to school _ bus. by
>>Correct!
6.They have a big collection of paintings _ Picasso. by
>>Correct!7. Have you seen any plays _ William Shakespeare. by
>>Correct!8.Do you take tea _ milk and sugar? with
>>Correct!9.Who is the man _ the sunglasses on? with
>>Correct!
10.Water boils _ 100 centigrade. at
>>Correct!
Oh! Sheela. Sorry.
>>Correct!
I felt so tired on yesterday indeed (you know, yesterday is Monday!), so after my light dinner, I lay down in my bed.
>>I felt so tired yesterday (You know, it was Monday yesterday!), so after my light dinner, I laid down on my bed.
Usually I used to get up after 1 hour, but I couldn’t wake up at last night. I don’t know why.
>>I used to get up after 1 hour, but I couldn\'t wake up last night. I don\'t know why.
I’m going to guess my body wanted a long relaxation.
>>I\'m going to guess that my body needed a long rest.Nowadays, I have been confused by my several problems which are studying English, my goal of life, money, my job, what I really want and something like that.
>>Nowadays, I have been confused with several problems which are: studying English, my goal in life, money, my job, what I really want and things like that.
I think they have made me more tired than usual.
>>Correct!
Anyway, I am sure that we can have funny conversation at tonight.
>>Anyway, I am sure that we can have a funny conversation tonight.
See you!
>>Correct!
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