my homework in 13, Fed
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: Please answer this question and explain your answer.
"How would you describe yourself as a human being? What quality do you like best in yourself and what do you like least?"
It’s the very difficult question. I can’t specifically explain about this. I think the noble man such as Jesus, Buddha, Mahomet, maybe can surely describe answers.
Anyway, I think ‘Thinking’ is the most quality as a human being.
‘Thinking’ what I explain includes many means which are ‘segregate right or wrong’, ‘sense of obligation’, ‘sense of justice’, etc.
And, I think the least quality as a human being is nothing. Whatever we seek is important to be human even if it is physical pleasure and beauty.
‘What quality as a human being is important of you?’ this is a so profound question. My enlightenment in my life lack for answer of this question yet.
Thanks Sheela!
Have a nice arvo!!
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Hi Mr. [이름],
I\'m glad to read your answer but I would really like you to analize the question. It\'s should be more about yourself as a human. Anyway, your answers were so good. Here are my corrections.
See you later~
T.Sheela
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Essay: Please answer this question and explain your answer.\"How would you describe yourself as a human being? What quality do you like best in yourself and what do you like least?\"It’s the very difficult question.
>> It\'s a very difficult question.
I can’t specifically explain about this.
>>I can\'t specifically explain my answer about this.
I think the noble man such as Jesus, Buddha, Mahomet, maybe can surely describe answers.
>>I think noble man such as Jesus, Buddha and Mahomet can surely give an answer.Anyway, I think ‘Thinking’ is the most quality as a human being.
>>Anyway, For me \"Way of thinking/reasoning \"is the most quality of a human being.‘Thinking’ what I explain includes many means which are ‘segregate right or wrong’, ‘sense of obligation’, ‘sense of justice’, etc.
>>I think \" Reasoning\" can explain why we can segregate right to wrong or have a sense of obligation and justice and many more.And, I think the least quality as a human being is nothing.
>>I think the least quality of a human being is nothing.
Whatever we seek is important to be human even if it is physical pleasure and beauty.
>>Whatever we seek is important to humans even thou it is physical pleasure or beauty.‘What quality as a human being is important of you?’ this is a so profound question.
>> What quality as a human being is important for you? This is a profound question.
My enlightenment in my life lack for answer of this question yet. ( I don\'t really know what you mean here.)>> I want to be enlightend to be able to answer this question.Thanks Sheela!
>>Thanks Sheela.Have a nice arvo!!
>>Correct!
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