my homework in 14, Jun

2012-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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I think that this quote means the former way is happened by education, but the later way is happened by instinct. So, according to the later way, we can find real character of someone. I agree to this quote exactly. For example, we learned what we do when we’re in lots of situations by parents and teachers. When we meet someone first time, we have to say ‘nice to meet you’ with smile and when a man walks with a woman in the road, he should stand by beside the road for protect her. Maybe, this situations and behaviors are similar what we call the manner which is learned in society. We can’t judge about their character from behavior like these. It just indicates their grade of education or manner. However, when we go though something which is happened sudden or is unknown, we’ll behave though our instinct or real character. For instance, when we get bitten some insect which we never seen, someone composedly deals with this problem, in the other hand, someone can’t calmly deal with this situation by itself. In this case, we can see the real character of them, it’s not necessary any education and manner. Therefore, if you want to see real character of someone, you should raise some insect, and then, when you have meal with then, you have to put a little insect on a table. Finally, you can see real character of them directly. Already summer comes here. It has been no raining for a while, just hot. For the farmer, we need enough rain, so I’d like to be raining in here.

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Hi there  Just keep on sending your composition and I\'ll be grateful to correct it for you. Take care and talk to you soon then.  Just keep on improving. Teacher Sheela Here are my corrections for you: I think that this quote means the former way is happened by education, but the later way is happened by instinct. >> Correct So, according to the later way, we can find real character of someone. >> So, according to the later, we can find the real of someone. I agree to this quote exactly. >> I exactly agree with this quote. For example, we learned what we do when we’re in lots of situations by parents and teachers. >> For example, we learned what we do when we\'re in various situations with our parents and teachers. When we meet someone first time, we have to say ‘nice to meet you’ with smile and when a man walks with a woman in the road, he should stand by beside the road for protect her. >> When we meet someone for the first time, we have to say \"Nice to meet you.\" with a smile and when a man walk with a woman on the road he should stand on the side of road to protect her. Maybe, this situations and behaviors are similar what we call the manner which is learned in society.  >> Maybe this situations and behaviors are similar to what we called \'manner\' to which we learned in the society. We can’t judge about their character from behavior like these. >> We can\'t judge their character from these behaviors. It just indicates their grade of education or manner. >> It just indicates their level of education or manner. However, when we go though something which is happened sudden or is unknown, we’ll behave though our instinct or real character. >> However, when we go through unexpected or sudden happening, we tend to show or behave our real character. For instance, when we get bitten some insect which we never seen, someone composedly deals with this problem, in the other hand, someone can’t calmly deal with this situation by itself. >> Correct In this case, we can see the real character of them, it’s not necessary any education and manner. >> Correct Therefore, if you want to see real character of someone, you should raise some insect, and then, when you have meal with then, you have to put a little insect on a table. >> Correct Finally, you can see real character of them directly. >> Finally, you can see the real character up-front.Already summer comes here. >> It\'s already summer season. It has been no raining for a while, just hot. >> Correct For the farmer, we need enough rain, so I’d like to be raining in here. >> For farmers, we need enough rain so I\'d like to rain here.

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