my homework in 15, May

2012-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I want to sleep now. 2. The child would like some milk. 3. Children like ice cream. 4. My sister likes reading. 5. Dogs like bones. 1. The snow looked as powdered sugar that morning. 2. Marcus was early as usual. 3. Mandy's mother works like a fire fighter. 4. Weather as this always puts me into a good mood. 5. Marissa runs like a gazelle. 1. Ronnie, I hadn't seen you in a long time. How have you been? 2. Yesterday I went to see my grandparents. 3. Some people say that it is better to be living for today. 4. I met all the requirements for the job already. 5. Marsha sometimes doesn't do her homework. I united 3 days homework. Finally, it is Friday today! Always I‘m glad in afternoon every Friday. Let’s enjoy weekend! See you!

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Mr. [이름]! Congratulation for doing 3 homeworks today. I thought you won\'t be able to do your homework today because you are busy this Friday. Anyway, please have time to check the correct answers i indicated. See you later! T.Sheela 1. I want to sleep now. >>Correct!2. The child would like some milk. >>Correct!3. Children like ice cream. >>Children want ice cream.4. My sister likes reading. >>Correct!5. Dogs like bones. >>Correct!1. The snow looked as powdered sugar that morning. >>The snow looked like powdered sugar that morning.2. Marcus was early as usual. >>Correct!3. Mandy\'s mother works like a fire fighter. >>Mandy\'s mother works as a fire fighter.4. Weather as this always puts me into a good mood. >>Weather like this always puts me into a good mood.5. Marissa runs like a gazelle. >>Correct!1. Ronnie, I hadn\'t seen you in a long time. How have you been? >>Ronnie, I haven\'t seen you in a long time. How have you been?2. Yesterday I went to see my grandparents. >>Correct!3. Some people say that it is better to be living for today. >>Some people say that it is better to be live for today.4. I met all the requirements for the job already. >>I have met all the requirements for the job already.5. Marsha sometimes doesn\'t do her homework. >>Correct!I united 3 days homework. >> I compiled the 3 days homework into one.Finally, it is Friday today! Always I‘m glad in afternoon every Friday. >> Finally, it\'s Friday today!, I always feel glad in the afternoon of Friday.Let’s enjoy weekend! See you! >> Let us enjoy the weekend! See you!

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