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2012-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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What do you see as the greatest threat to the environment today? (Start your answer by writing: The greatest threat to the environment today is.......) This is a good question. The greatest threat to the environment today is human ourselves. You know, the threat, carbon dioxide, lots of garbage, a loud noise and drain on the resources, is caused by human. We have lived so indiscriminate until now. Also we haven’t taken care of animals, plants and Earth. Human have been so greedy. We always want to more comfortable, more fast and more foods. Any animals and plants don’t live like human. They take only necessary stuff. If we keep our life like today, we will be thrown out of our planet. I think we will soon. It's cold today. take care! See you!

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Hi Mr. [이름], You have a wonderful thoughts! See you later! T.Sheela What do you see as the greatest threat to the environment today?(Start your answer by writing: The greatest threat to the environment today is.......)This is a good question. >>Correct! The greatest threat to the environment today is human ourselves. >>The greatest threat to the environment today is human itself.You know, the threat, carbon dioxide, lots of garbage, a loud noise and drain on the resources, is caused by human. >>Sincethe threats are carbon dioxide, lots of garbage, a loud noise and drain on the resources, are caused by humans. We have lived so indiscriminate until now. >>We have lived indiscriminated until now. Also we haven’t taken care of animals, plants and Earth. >>Also, we haven\'t taken good care of the animals, plants and Earth.Human have been so greedy. >>Correct! We always want to more comfortable, more fast and more foods. >> We always want to more comfortable and have more foods. Any animals and plants don’t live like human. >> Any animals and plants don\'t live like humans. They take only necessary stuff. >> Correct!If we keep our life like today, we will be thrown out of our planet. >>Correct! I think we will soon. >>Correct!It\'s cold today. take care! >>It\'s cold today. Take care!See you! >>Correct!

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