my homework in 16, Jul

In Korea, many students attend Univ., exactly at least 80% high school students have joined Univ. every year. This percentage is the top in OECD members. (Case of German, it is 35% and it is less than 40% in U.S.A) Do they really want to study professional knowledge? Can they choice the major what they want? Absolutely not. Most of students should adjust their major and Univ. as their score. In case of this, aim of students is to get a degree. In the other hand, some students join Univ. for real professional knowledge. Most of them have surely dream and goal as become doctor or engineer. Two things are main reason why many students go to Univ. And then, many students who want to attend Univ. have another expectation while they study in there, it is a romance in campus. In Korea, unlike western, there is no any extra experience in high school. High school students have to only study hard to attend Univ. Some high school teachers say that if you go to Univ., you will have a girlfriend or boyfriend and you can do everything like travels, temping job as well as club activities. Many students believe them and have big expectation about their campus life. (Even if reality is so different to expectation.) In case of me, three reasons affected to my choice. I wanted to be an architect when I was high school student, so I choose my Univ. and my major. I think most of students attend Univ. with complicated reason.

What a very detailed work you did here on your homework. I\'m quite impressed. Let me just advise you that it\'s more appropriate for you to use the whole word \'university\' than \'univ.\' Also you mentioned \'two main reasons\' why students go to university but you didn\'t mention the last one. You also mentioned that there are three reasons that affected your choice about studying in a university, however you only gave one reason.So try as much as you can to enumerate those to complete the ideas of what you have written. Nonetheless, a job well done! Cheers! T. Sheela In Korea, many students attend Univ., >>In Korea, many students attend the university. exactly at least 80% high school students have joined Univ. every year. >>At least 80% of high school students enter a university every year. This percentage is the top in OECD members. >>This is the highest percentage among OECD members. (Case of German, it is 35% and it is less than 40% in U.S.A) >>In the case of Germany, it is 35%. And it is less than 40 % in the U.S.A.)  Do they really want to study professional knowledge? >>Do they really want to study to become a professional? >>Do they really want to study to be good at a specific field? >>Do they really want to specialize on a field by studying? Can they choice the major what they want? >>Can they choose the major that they want? >>Do they have a choice on the major that they want? Absolutely not. >>Correct!  Most of students should adjust their major and Univ. as their score. >>Most students pick a major in their universities based on their grades. In case of this, aim of students is to get a degree. >>In this case, the only aim of students is to get a degree.  In the other hand, some students join Univ. for real professional knowledge. >>On the other hand, some students enter a univeristy for a real professional knowledge. Most of them have surely dream and goal as become doctor or engineer. >>Most of them dream or want to become a doctor or an engineer. Two things are main reason why many students go to Univ. >>There are two main reasons why many students go to a university. And then, many students who want to attend Univ. have another expectation while they study in there, it is a romance in campus. >>Many students attend a university to find love while studying there. In Korea, unlike western, there is no any extra experience in high school. >>In Korea, unlike western countries, there are no extra experience in high school.  High school students have to only study hard to attend Univ. >>High school students only have to study hard when they attend a university. Some high school teachers say that if you go to Univ., you will have a girlfriend or boyfriend and you can do everything like travels, temping job as well as club activities. >>Some high school teachers say that if you go to a university, you will have a girlfriend or boyfriend and you can do everything like travel, find a part time job as well as do some club activities. Many students believe them and have big expectation about their campus life. >>Many students believe them and have big expectations about their campus life.  (Even if reality is so different to expectation.) >>Even in reality, the expectations are so different.  In case of me, three reasons affected to my choice. >>In my case, three reasons affected my choice. I wanted to be an architect when I was high school student, so I choose my Univ. and my major. >>First, I\'ve wanted to be an architect since I was a high school student. So I chose my university and my major. I think most of students attend Univ. with complicated reason. >>I think most students attend university with complicated reasons.