my homework in 16, May

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The advertising is so efficient method to increase sale of products. Many companies spend a lot of money to make media advertisements and hire a big star for advertising. Costumers are extremely influenced to buy something by these advertisements. Of course, if these advertising are true, it’ll not be a problem. But, most of advertising are much exaggerated and they show the fantastic images of product than inform real information of product. So, many people buy something which is unuseful or more expensive things because of advertisement. For example, many cosmetics companies make a lot of advertisement to increase of product’s image. Their advertisement always describes that if you use our expensive cosmetics, your skin will be better like model which appear on TV. Is this advertisement true? Totally not. But, many women who want to have beautiful skin may buy these cosmetics with big expectation. However, practically they can’t get effect which they want. There are many things happen to like above example. It’s not good for costumer, therefore, exaggerated advertising have to been decreased and costumer have to wisely select products which is useful.

Hi Mr. [이름], You did a marvelous job in explaining your thoughts. I am very happy when I was reading your composition because it was very interesting. I hope to read more composition like this from you. See you later! T.Sheela Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. >> Correct! >>OR Today, the high sales of famous consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? >> Correct!The advertising is so efficient method to increase sale of products. >> Correct! Many companies spend a lot of money to make media advertisements and hire a big star for advertising. >> Many companies spend a lot of money to make media advertisements and hire a big star to advertise. Costumers are extremely influenced to buy something by these advertisements. >> Correct! Of course, if these advertising are true, it’ll not be a problem. >> Of course, if these advertisements are true, it’ll not be a problem. But, most of advertising are much exaggerated and they show the fantastic images of product than inform real information of product. >> But, most of the advertisements are exaggerating that they show the unrealistic results of the product than to inform the viewers the real content of product. So, many people buy something which is unuseful or more expensive things because of advertisement. >> Correct!For example, many cosmetics companies make a lot of advertisement to increase of product’s image. >> For example, many cosmetics companies make a lot of advertisement to boost the products. Their advertisement always describes that if you use our expensive cosmetics, your skin will be better like model which appear on TV. >> Their advertisement always says, that if you use our expensive cosmetics, your skin will be better like the model on the TV. Is this advertisement true? Totally not. >> Correct! But, many women who want to have beautiful skin may buy these cosmetics with big expectation. >> But, many women who wants to have a beautiful skin may buy these cosmetics with big expectation. However, practically they can’t get effect which they want. >> Correct! There are many things happen to like above example. >> There are many cases like the above example. It’s not good for costumer, therefore, exaggerated advertising have to been decreased and costumer have to wisely select products which is useful. >> It’s not good for costumer, therefore, the exaggerated advertisement have to be decreased and costumers have to be wise in selecting products which are useful.