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2012-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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My mom macerated some pork for cook which is Korean traditional boiled pork, is called Bossam in Korean. She put them on dining table, and then, went to market for buying some food supplies. At that time, my dog, a beagle which is big trouble maker in our home, have stared and have had her eye. Finally she got a big chance and caught it! Some pork was absorbed in an instant. My younger brother saw that situation! However, he couldn’t give her a good scolding because he so love her! After a while, my mom came back at home, and found out her reduced pork. She asked my brother about the pork, my brother prevaricated about that. At the moment, my dog enjoyed peaceful her nap on the bed. It was so helpful to me what you said yesterday. I’ll keep going forward to my dream. I think that all of challenge involve some crisis and fear. I have to overcome about that. I will. Enjoy your happy Tuesday and see you later!

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Mr.[이름], I am so happy to hear that you will move on with your plan.I think you being challenge on how strong and dedicated you are to your dream. Don\'t forget to make a lot of plans for all the fears that your have in mind. I know that everything will go smoothly. I think you are confuse on when to use the preposition to and for. Please have times to study those words. See you later! T.Sheela My mom macerated some pork for cook which is Korean traditional boiled pork, is called Bossam in Korean. >> My mom macerated some pork to cook a Korean traditional boiled pork which is called Bossam. She put them on dining table, and then, went to market for buying some food supplies. >> She put them on the dining table and went to the market to buy some food supplies. At that time, my dog, a beagle which is big trouble maker in our home, have stared and have had her eye. >> At that time, my dog which is beagle is big trouble maker in our home, he/she stared and had her eye on the food. Finally she got a big chance and caught it! Some pork was absorbed in an instant. >> Correct! My younger brother saw that situation! However, he couldn’t give her a good scolding because he so love her! >> My younger brother saw that situation! However, he couldn’t scold at her because he love her. After a while, my mom came back at home, and found out her reduced pork. >> Correct! She asked my brother about the pork, my brother prevaricated about that. >> She asked my brother about the pork,but my brother prevaricated the story. At the moment, my dog enjoyed peaceful her nap on the bed. >> At the moment, my dog was enjoying her peaceful nap on the bed. It was so helpful to me what you said yesterday. >> What you said yesterday was helpful to me. I’ll keep going forward to my dream. >> Correct! I think that all of challenge involve some crisis and fear. >>I think that all challenges involves some crisis and fear. I have to overcome about that. >> I have to overcome them all. I will. >>Correct!Enjoy your happy Tuesday and see you later! >> Correct! >>Enjoy your happy Wednesday and see you later!

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