my homework in 17, May

Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in order important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. I think it is the fairly rewards. Some successful sports star chose their job by fairly way and then they had beared a lot of training and pains of physical and psychological for everyday. Though this way, they finally had achieved the best position on their part. Of course, it may be that they are so lucky people because nowadays, sports industry is so strong like financial industry. Nevertheless, we have to respect their efforts and results. Most of professional sports player started their exercise from elementary school or before then. From then, they had to forget a lot of things as eating fatty food, playing with friends and so on. They have to keep going these life until retire from their sports. And then, they have shorter their best days than another workers. In case of fortunate player whose best days are just between 8 years and 12 years in professional field. It is so nice case. Most of players who have no ability or good luck can’t play in professional field for all their life. Maybe someone thinks they are so fortunate people and their earnings are unfair. I think it is that someone just looks at the glossy side. We have to see the other side of them. They have enough made an effort for their success. We have to accept it.

Mr. [이름], Again, I applause you for the good job. I have to agree with you when it comes to professional athlete. They have strive hard fro their achievement. We had one famous boxer here in my country. His name is Manny Pacquio.When he was not yet a famous boxer, her was just an ordinary baker. But because of hard work and perceverance, he is now one of the riches man in our country. I think even thou you are a professional or not you can always have the furtune that you want with perceverance. Thank you for the good topic. I think I have to really change my homeworks for you. See you later! T.Sheela Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in order important professions. >>>Successful professional athlete can earn a great deal of money more than people with high professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. >> Correct!Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. >>Correct!I think it is the fairly rewards. >>I think it is the fairly a reward. Some successful sports star chose their job by fairly way and then they had beared a lot of training and pains of physical and psychological for everyday. >> Some successful sports star chose their job in a fair way because they had beared a lot of pain in their daily training for their physical and psychological strength. Though this way, they finally had achieved the best position on their part. >> In this way, they finally had achieved the best position on their part. Of course, it may be that they are so lucky people because nowadays, sports industry is so strong like financial industry. >>Of course, they maybe are so lucky people because nowadays, sports industry is so strong like financial industry. Nevertheless, we have to respect their efforts and results. >> Correct!Most of professional sports player started their exercise from elementary school or before then. >>Correct! From then, they had to forget a lot of things as eating fatty food, playing with friends and so on. >>Correct! They have to keep going these life until retire from their sports. >>They have to continue this life style until they retire from their professions. And then, they have shorter their best days than another workers. >>And they have shorter best days than another workers. In case of fortunate player whose best days are just between 8 years and 12 years in professional field. >>In case of fortunate, players whose best years are just between 8 years to 12 years in their professional field. It is so nice case. >>It is a nice scenario. Most of players who have no ability or good luck can’t play in professional field for all their life. >> Most of the players who has no ability or good luck can’t play as a professional player for their entire life.Maybe someone thinks they are so fortunate people and their earnings are unfair. >> Correct! I think it is that someone just looks at the glossy side. >> Correct! We have to see the other side of them. >> Correct! They have enough made an effort for their success. We have to accept it. >> They have made enough effort for their success. We have to accept it.