my homework in 18, Jul

2012-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

1) He's listened to the song. -> He has listened to the song. 2) She's reading a comic. -> She is reading a comic. 3) It's rained a little. -> It has rained a little. 4) She's been here. -> She has been here. 5) He's written an e-mail. -> He has written an e-mail. Oh. Sorry, Sheela. You’re right. I couldn’t wake up on class time yesterday. After my exercise at yesterday evening, I ate some cereal and salad. And then, I lay on bed. It was all. Haha. When I woke up, my computer has shown BBC World News, it was 2 am. Anyway, I will attend today class on time. See you!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I hope you are having a great day today! Thank you for answering your homework and good job in answering them correctly! I am excited about having class with you later! You take care and talk to you soon! --T Sheela----  He\'s listened to the song. -> He has listened to the song. >>>CORRECT She\'s reading a comic. -> She is reading a comic.  >>>CORRECT  It\'s rained a little. -> It has rained a little.  >>>CORRECT She\'s been here. -> She has been here.  >>>CORRECT He\'s written an e-mail. -> He has written an e-mail.>>>CORRECT Oh. Sorry, Sheela. >>>CORRECT >>>OR >>>OH! I\'m sorry Sheela. You’re right. >>>CORRECT I couldn’t wake up on class time yesterday. >>>I could not wake up for class yesterday. After my exercise at yesterday evening, I ate some cereal and salad. >>>After my exercise yesterday evening, I ate some cereals and salad. >>>After my exercise last night, I had some cereals and a salad.  And then, I lay on bed. >>>And then I lay in my bed.  It was all. Haha. >>>That was all. >>>That was it. When I woke up, my computer has shown BBC World News, it was 2 am. >>>When I woke up at 2 in the morning, my computer was showing BBC World News.Anyway, I will attend today class on time. >>>Anyway, I will attend my class on time today. See you!! >>>CORRECT

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