my homework in 18, Jun

2012-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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In Korea, there is the hugest military training in which all of Korean soldier have to join while the summer. Korea army, navy, air force and U.S.A army must are trained together for 2 weeks in everywhere Korea. All of soldiers are armed to the teeth with several equipments for training period, but some American soldiers have some better equipment which is more light and small. They always act high and mighty in front of Korean soldier. Of course, I can’t sure, just a little bird told me about it. The reason is that I had worked for Korea Air Force at military airport which is nearby Seoul. I couldn’t find the American army who acted high and mighty. I have a plan for exercise, today. But, suddenly, I feel bothering about that. I’d like to go to home and lay on bed with watching baseball game. However, I didn’t have exercise for last 2 weeks because of my bothering. Hmm, it is too difficult whether I’ll have exercise or rest. Anyway, see you later!

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Hi Mr. [이름], I hope you were able to go to the gym. You told me that you were able to achieve your ideal weight, so you are taking a break from the gym but I think you won\'t be able to feel comfortable if you suddenly escape your previous hobby. So my advice,go to the gym and after that you can go home and watch a baseball game. See you later handsome! T.Sheela In Korea, there is the hugest military training in which all of Korean soldier have to join while the summer. >> In Korea, there is this huge military training in which all of Korean soldier have to join during the summer. Korea army, navy, air force and U.S.A army must are trained together for 2 weeks in everywhere Korea. >> Korea\'s army, navy, air force and U.S.A army must train together for 2 weeks anywhere in Korea. All of soldiers are armed to the teeth with several equipments for training period, but some American soldiers have some better equipment which is more light and small. >>Correct! They always act high and mighty in front of Korean soldier. >> Correct! Of course, I can’t sure, just a little bird told me about it. >>Of course, I am not sure, just a little bird told me about it. The reason is that I had worked for Korea Air Force at military airport which is nearby Seoul. >> The reason is that I had worked in Korea Air Force at the military airport which is nearby Seoul. I couldn’t find the American army who acted high and mighty. >> Correct!I have a plan for exercise, today. >>Correct! But, suddenly, I feel bothering about that. >> But, suddenly, I feel bothered about that. I’d like to go to home and lay on bed with watching baseball game. >> I’d like to go home and lay down on bed while watching baseball game. However, I didn’t have exercise for last 2 weeks because of my bothering. >> However, I didn’t have exercise for last 2 weeks because of my boredom. >>However, I didn’t have exercise for last 2 weeks because of being bothered. Hmm, it is too difficult whether I’ll have exercise or rest. >> Hmm, it is too difficult whether if I’ll have exercise or rest. Anyway, see you later! >>Correct!

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