my homework in 18, May

2012-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I'd rather have wine _____beer. d. instead of 2. _____ bad weather, the trip will be postponed to next week. b. In case of 3._____ my fellow employees, I would like to thank management for all they have done to improve our situation. c. On behalf of 4.We finally solved our problem ____ a new device created by our research and development department b. by means of 5. _____ me, I will be happy to dedicate a few extra hours to the cause. a. As for It is hard Monday today. You know, I changed my cycle of Monday to get skincare instead of lying in my bed. Well, there are so strong ultraviolet rays from spring to summer in Korea. I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunshine. I think you should apply enough sunblock everyday. Anyway, it is very beautiful heaven today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela!

강사 첨삭

Bonjour Mr. [이름], Yehey! You got a perfect score! I know you just change your Monday routine and I think it\'s a little bit difficult to adjust because you just started the new routine last week. I remember that you told me about your being sensitive to sunlight. Well, I hope you won\'t have any skin damage because of the heat. The weather in my country keeps on changing so, I have never used sunblock this Summer. See you later! T.Sheela 1. I\'d rather have wine _____beer.d. instead of >>Correct!2. _____ bad weather, the trip will be postponed to next week.b. In case of >>Correct!3._____ my fellow employees, I would like to thank management for all they have done to improve our situation.c. On behalf of >>Correct!4.We finally solved our problem ____ a new device created by our research and development departmentb. by means of >>Correct!5. _____ me, I will be happy to dedicate a few extra hours to the cause.a. As for >>Correct!It is hard Monday today. >> Correct! You know, I changed my cycle of Monday to get skincare instead of lying in my bed. >> You know, I changed my Monday routine so instead of lying in my bed I go out and have a skincare. Well, there are so strong ultraviolet rays from spring to summer in Korea. >> Well, there is a strong ultraviolet rays from Spring to Sunner in Korea. I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunshine. >> Correct! >>OR I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunlight. I think you should apply enough sunblock everyday. >> Correct!Anyway, it is very beautiful heaven today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela! >>Anyway, it is very beautiful day today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela! >> OR Anyway, Today in Seoul we have a beautiful sky. See you later Sheela!

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