my homework in 18, May
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I'd rather have wine _____beer.
d. instead of
2. _____ bad weather, the trip will be postponed to next week.
b. In case of
3._____ my fellow employees, I would like to thank management for all they have done to improve our situation.
c. On behalf of
4.We finally solved our problem ____ a new device created by our research and development department
b. by means of
5. _____ me, I will be happy to dedicate a few extra hours to the cause.
a. As for
It is hard Monday today. You know, I changed my cycle of Monday to get skincare instead of lying in my bed. Well, there are so strong ultraviolet rays from spring to summer in Korea. I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunshine. I think you should apply enough sunblock everyday.
Anyway, it is very beautiful heaven today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela!
강사 첨삭
Bonjour Mr. [이름],
Yehey! You got a perfect score!
I know you just change your Monday routine and I think it\'s a little bit difficult to adjust because you just started the new routine last week. I remember that you told me about your being sensitive to sunlight. Well, I hope you won\'t have any skin damage because of the heat. The weather in my country keeps on changing so, I have never used sunblock this Summer. See you later!
T.Sheela
1. I\'d rather have wine _____beer.d. instead of
>>Correct!2. _____ bad weather, the trip will be postponed to next week.b. In case of
>>Correct!3._____ my fellow employees, I would like to thank management for all they have done to improve our situation.c. On behalf of
>>Correct!4.We finally solved our problem ____ a new device created by our research and development departmentb. by means of
>>Correct!5. _____ me, I will be happy to dedicate a few extra hours to the cause.a. As for
>>Correct!It is hard Monday today.
>> Correct!
You know, I changed my cycle of Monday to get skincare instead of lying in my bed.
>> You know, I changed my Monday routine so instead of lying in my bed I go out and have a skincare.
Well, there are so strong ultraviolet rays from spring to summer in Korea.
>> Well, there is a strong ultraviolet rays from Spring to Sunner in Korea.
I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunshine.
>> Correct!
>>OR I have to apply sunblock every 6 hours to my face because my skin is so sensitive to sunlight.
I think you should apply enough sunblock everyday.
>> Correct!Anyway, it is very beautiful heaven today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela!
>>Anyway, it is very beautiful day today in Seoul. See you later, Sheela!
>> OR Anyway, Today in Seoul we have a beautiful sky. See you later Sheela!
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