my homework in 19, Jun

2012-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Please call me on ten o'clock 2. There will be a concert in the evening. 3. While my stay in New York, I made many friends. (I’m not sure) 4. The school library is open from nine until four. 5. We will have a party on Christmas Eve. (I’m not sure) 6. You must complete this homework until next Tuesday. 7. We must finish this job until next Monday. 8. I was reading a book last night from eleven o'clock. (I’m not sure) 9. That store is closed on Saturdays and Sundays. 10. He will leave in the morning of the third. (I’m not sure) Oh. Sorry Sheela. I didn’t have exercises yesterday, and also I didn’t attend your class. After I finished work yesterday, I directly went to home and ate dinner with instant noodle which is not good for my health. And then, you know, I laid on my bed with watching TV and I couldn’t wake up again until this morning. I think the one of reason why I feel more tired in recently is weather become hot. Oh, no, my fault. I must not find the reason from outside of me. All of the reason is that my will had become weak. On my account! I have to get myself together. I’ll try and I wish. This is my homework which was sleeping in my computer in my office.

강사 첨삭

  Hello Janu [이름] It was nice to know that you had a time to answer your assignment. You got 4 out of ten, I think that you need to practice more on preposition. Don\'t be discourage, I know you could do better soon. Have a nice and enjoy learning English.- ___Smile!___   1. Please call me on ten o\'clock  Please call me at ten o\'clock2. There will be a concert in the evening. Correct3. While my stay in New York, I made many friends. (I’m not sure) During my stay in New York, I made many friends.4. The school library is open from nine until four. Correct 5. We will have a party on Christmas Eve. (I’m not sure) Correct6. You must complete this homework until next Tuesday. You must complete this homework by next Tuesday.7. We must finish this job until next Monday. We must finish this job on next Monday.8. I was reading a book last night from eleven o\'clock. (I’m not sure)I was reading a book last night at eleven o\'clock. 9. That store is closed on Saturdays and Sundays. Correct10. He will leave in the morning of the third. (I’m not sure)He will leave on the morning of the third.

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