my homework in 2, Apr
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What is your typical way of dealing with conflict?
Well, I think the best way of dealing with conflict is to talk about problems with someone. The principle reason of conflict is that thought or point of view of each other is not same. And, when they don’t recognize each other, they have no choice but to make conflict.
Just now, it’s happened conflict with my co-worker because of boundary of work.
Now I hardly like to talk with my co-worker, but don’t have a talk with him we can’t solve conflict forever.
To talk about conflict is so important for solve the problem. Through the talk we can find reason of conflict and understand well each other. Of course, we can’t find the solution even though we have enough talk, but conflict wouldn’t fare worse. We try to solve the problem through talk and go on, I believe that conflict will be disappeared or will become smaller.
Snow is falling on April! And it is gust of windy day. I wish to stop snowing on my quitting time.
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What is your typical way of dealing with conflict?
>>CorrectWell, I think the best way of dealing with conflict is to talk about your problems with someone.
>>Correct
The principle reason of conflict is that thought or point of view of each other is not same.
>>The principal reason of conflict is that our thought or point of view are different from each other.
And, when they don’t recognize each other, they have no choice but to make conflict.
>>And when they don\'t recognize each other\'s opinion, they don\'t have a choice but to have a confilct.Just now, it’s happened conflict with my co-worker because of boundary of work.
>>Just now, it happened to my co-worker because of bounderies of work.Now I hardly like to talk with my co-worker, but don’t have a talk with him we can’t solve conflict forever.
>>now, I hardly like to talk to my co-worker but not talking to him means we can\'t solve our confilcts forever.To talk about the conflict is so important for solve the problem.
>>Correct
Through the talk we can find reason of conflict and understand well each other.
>>Through conversation we can trace the reason of the misunderstanding and solve the poblem.
Of course, we can’t find the solution even though we have enough talk, but conflict wouldn’t fare worse.
>> Of course, we can not find the solution by just talking , but it won\'t worsen the conflict.
We try to solve the problem through talk and go on, I believe that conflict will be disappeared or will become smaller.
>> We tried to solve the problem by having a talk and then move on, in this way I believe that the conflict will disappear or it will be forgoten.Snow is falling on April! And it is gust of windy day.
>> Snow is falling this April and it is gusty today.
I wish to stop snowing on my quitting time.
>> I wish the snow to stop on my quitting time.
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