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I think ‘Dynamic’ is a most proper word which describes our country. Well, my country had been spent sad times while Japanese colonial era. Furthermore we had been had tragic the Korean war from 1950 to 1953. After the war, we were one of the poorest nations in the world. But, nowadays, we are one of the members in G20. For 50 years, we have made great advances in economy. There isn’t the case like us in the world. And, our nation, particularly Seoul has been changed fast in part of society, culture and economy. Also, our city never gets to sleep in spite of night. If you visit Seoul, you can aware of my meaning. Our some fashion malls, markets, restaurants and clubs always are opened for costumers. You can get something which you want anytime in Seoul. Finally most of Korean wants to faster about all things for example internet speed, traffic and etc. These tendencies make Korea to dynamic. These are reason why I think ‘Dynamic’ is proper word which describes our country.

Hi Mr [이름], Thank you for your composition. I like the word you have choosen to describe your country. When I was studying we have encountered Korea\'s history.I think most of the countries had undegone to a very challenging times.My country and yours had a vice versa.Long time ago,my country was rich but now, we are one of the poorest, i think. T.Sheela I think ‘Dynamic’ is a most proper word which describes our country. >> I think Dynamic is the most appropriate word which describes our country.Well, my country had been spent sad times while Japanese colonial era. >> Well, my country had spent a sad times with the Japanese colonial era. >>OR Well, my country has spend a sad moments with the Japanese colonial era. Furthermore we had been had tragic the Korean war from 1950 to 1953. >> Furthermore we had a tragical Korean war from 1950 to 1953. After the war, we were one of the poorest nations in the world. >> Correct! But, nowadays, we are one of the members in G20. >> But now a days, we are one of the members of G20. For 50 years, we have made great advances in economy. >> For 50 years, we made a great advance in economy. There isn’t the case like us in the world. >>There aren\'t any case just like us in the whole world. And, our nation, particularly Seoul has been changed fast in part of society, culture and economy. >> And our nation, particularly Seoul had changed when it come to society, culture and economy. Also, our city never gets to sleep in spite of night. >>Also, our city never sleep. If you visit Seoul, you can aware of my meaning. >> If you visit Seoul, you\'ll know what I mean. Our some fashion malls, markets, restaurants and clubs always are opened for costumers. >> Some of our fashion malls, markets, restaurants and clubs are always open for the costumers. You can get something which you want anytime in Seoul. >> Correct! >>OR You can get anything you want at anytime in Seoul.Finally most of Korean wants to faster about all things for example internet speed, traffic and etc. >> Finally, most of Koreans wanted to have everything to be in high speed.Example the internet speed, the traffic jam and so on. These tendencies make Korea to dynamic. >>These tendencies make Korea dynamic. >>OR These events makes Korea a dynamic country.These are reason why I think ‘Dynamic’ is proper word which describes our country. >>There are the reason why I think Dynamic is a good word to describes our country.