my homework in 20, Mar

In modern times, everything is faster than before. Most of contemporaries want to faster and more comfortable about everything. They are frantic in all day wherever office, restaurant and their home indeed. If they have got food a little later than someone who had come into later than them in restaurant, they have been annoyed about this, and then, have complained to manager about this. This is the harmful effects of development, so some scholars argue for benefit of slowness to people. They argue that we have to walk slowly, eat slowly and think slowly. It gives some auspicious feeling to us and we can reprocess our thought. Sometimes, I have tried to follow this method but not so well. However I’ll keep on trying. It’s a strong windy day. I feel not good. You’re right. I need some vitamin C. I have to buy orange juice or something like that on my road to home. Thanks Sheela. See you later.

Hi Mr. [이름], I am happy that you have decided to take some vitamins C.Try to take some oranges or strawberry.Thay are rich in vitamin C and take a rest after work. I\'ll see you later. Here are my corrections. T.Sheela In modern times, everything is faster than before. >>Correct!Most of contemporaries want to faster and more comfortable about everything. >>Most of the contemporaries want to make it faster and more comfortable in everything.They are frantic in all day wherever office, restaurant and their home indeed. >> They are frantic the whole day whenever they are in the office, retaurant and in their home.If they have got food a little later than someone who had come into later than them in restaurant, they have been annoyed about this, and then, have complained to manager about this. >> If they got their food earlier that someone who just arrived later than them in the restaurant, they will be annoyed about it and complain to the manager. This is the harmful effects of development, so some scholars argue for benefit of slowness to people. >> This is a harmful effect of development. Some scholars argue about the benefit of being slowness of people.They argue that we have to walk slowly, eat slowly and think slowly. >> They argue about walking, eating and thinking slowly. It gives some auspicious feeling to us and we can reprocess our thought. >> It gives us an auspicious feeling and we can reprocess our thought.Sometimes, I have tried to follow this method but not so well. However I\'ll keep on trying. >>Sometimes, I tried to follow this method but I did not.However, I want to keep on trying.It\'s a strong windy day. >>We have a strong wind today. I feel not good. >>I don\'t feel good. You\'re right. >>Correct! I need some vitamin C. >>Correct! I have to buy orange juice or something like that on my road to home. >>I have to buy an orange juice or something that has a vitamin C on my way home. >>OR I have to buy an orange juice or something that has a vitamin C along the road.Thanks Sheela. See you later. >>Correct!