my homework in 20, Mar

2012-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi! Sheela. First of all, I’m sorry that I didn’t talk to you about postponement. I have had two small and serious problems. First, you know, my hands-free was broken on last Tuesday. I have to buy new one or repair it for having smooth conversation with you. I guess it takes one day or 2 days. And then I have caught a real cold. I have had a runny nose and a headache for 3 days. I think after this weekend I’ll be better. I wish. ;) Sheela, my very kindly and cheerful teacher, I’ll be back on next Wednesday. Have a nice weekend! See you!

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Hi Mr. [이름], Thank you for explaining why you suddenly postpone our class. I was a little bit shock when I check my schedule and you where not there.I thought you already went to the hospital and got confined.Anyway, I really want you to feel better and I can really wait to talk to you. T.Sheela Hi! Sheela. >>CORRECT!First of all, I’m sorry that I didn’t talk to you about postponement. >>First of all, I am sorry for not telling you about my postponement.I have had two small and serious problems. >> CORRECT!First, you know, my hands-free was broken on last Tuesday. >> First, you know that my hands-free phone was broken last Tuesday. I have to buy new one or repair it for having smooth conversation with you. >>I have to buy a new one or repair it to have a smooth conversation with you. I guess it takes one day or 2 days. >>Correct! >>OR I guess it takes 1 day or 2 days. And then I have caught a real cold. >> And then I caught a bad cold. I have had a runny nose and a headache for 3 days. >> I have a runny nose and a headache for 3 days.I think after this weekend I’ll be better. I wish. ;) >> I wish after this week I will feel better.Sheela, my very kindly and cheerful teacher, I’ll be back on next Wednesday. >> Sheela, my very kind and cheerful teacher. I will be bacl on Wednesday.Have a nice weekend! See you! >>CORRECT!

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