my homework in 21, Feb
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Use the following words in a sentence.
1. Unveiling
2. Emerging
3. Explorer
4. Grueling
5. Haggle
My company, Hyundai Motors will haggle over prices of land where they build a new factory.
They want to be unveiling a new car in Brazil.
You know, nowadays Brazil comes into a spotlight for emerging market in business because they have huge population and natural resources.
However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who were got a grueling for anxious public order.
My homework is so late. Sorry.
These days I feel more tired than before. I think I need nutritional supplements. ^^
Take care, Sheela.
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Hello Mr. [Name]! Here are your corrections for this homework.
T. Sheela
Use the following words in a sentence.1. Unveiling 2. Emerging3. Explorer4. Grueling 5. Haggle My company, Hyundai Motors will haggle over prices of land where they build a new factory.
>>My company, Hyundai Motors, will haggle over prices of land where they will build a new factory. They want to be unveiling a new car in Brazil.
>> They went to an unveiling of a new car in Brazil.You know, nowadays Brazil comes into a spotlight for emerging market in business because they have huge population and natural resources.
>>You know, nowadays Brazil comes into the spotlight as an emerging market in business because they have a huge population and lots of natural resources.
However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who were got a grueling for anxious public order.
>>However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who got a grueling for strict public orders.
My homework is so late. Sorry.
>>correct
>> I am sorry that I submitted my homework very late.These days I feel more tired than before. I think I need nutritional supplements. ^^
>>correct
Take care, Sheela.
Take care sheela.
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