my homework in 21, Feb

2012-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Use the following words in a sentence. 1. Unveiling 2. Emerging 3. Explorer 4. Grueling 5. Haggle My company, Hyundai Motors will haggle over prices of land where they build a new factory. They want to be unveiling a new car in Brazil. You know, nowadays Brazil comes into a spotlight for emerging market in business because they have huge population and natural resources. However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who were got a grueling for anxious public order. My homework is so late. Sorry. These days I feel more tired than before. I think I need nutritional supplements. ^^ Take care, Sheela.

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Hello Mr. [Name]! Here are your corrections for this homework. T. Sheela Use the following words in a sentence.1. Unveiling 2. Emerging3. Explorer4. Grueling 5. Haggle My company, Hyundai Motors will haggle over prices of land where they build a new factory. >>My company, Hyundai Motors, will haggle over prices of land where they will build a new factory. They want to be unveiling a new car in Brazil. >> They went to an unveiling of a new car in Brazil.You know, nowadays Brazil comes into a spotlight for emerging market in business because they have huge population and natural resources. >>You know, nowadays Brazil comes into the spotlight as an emerging market in business because they have a huge population and lots of natural resources. However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who were got a grueling for anxious public order. >>However, not too long ago there were a lot of explorers who got a grueling for strict public orders. My homework is so late. Sorry. >>correct >> I am sorry that I submitted my homework very late.These days I feel more tired than before. I think I need nutritional supplements. ^^ >>correct Take care, Sheela. Take care sheela.

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