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QUESTION What have you discovered from your errors or mistakes? Every people commit lots of mistakes in their life. Of course me too. I make mistakes every day on my work and my life. Some people feel frustrated because of their mistakes. But I’m not. I don’t care that make mistakes if I do my best on my work. The mistakes were result from I do my best are not problem. It’s a chance for make me a strong man. I can find my weak point by this mistake and I can fix my wrong. I have no occasion to be ashamed. On the other hand, the mistakes were committed by my laziness are so serious. I have not a leg to stand on. I have to keep on trying to reduce this case. ‘Failure is but the threshold of success.’ and ‘Opportunities are found in times of crisis.’ are my favorite proverb. I believe it!

Mr. [이름], Wow you are diligent in making your homework. You are right, we should not be ashame of our mistake because it make us grow into a better man. I have been dealing to a lot of mistake but I learn a lot from it. Thank you for the wonderful answer. T.Sheela. QUESTIONWhat have you discovered from your errors or mistakes?Every people commit lots of mistakes in their life. >>Correct! Of course me too. >> Correct! >>OR Of course that includes me. I make mistakes every day on my work and my life. >> I make mistakes every day in my life.Some people feel frustrated because of their mistakes. >> Correct! But I’m not. >>Correct!I don’t care that make mistakes if I do my best on my work. >> I do not care if I make mistakes provided that I do my best on my work. The mistakes were result from I do my best are not problem. >> The mistake is the result of what I did and my best is not a problem. It’s a chance for make me a strong man. >> It is a chance for a man to be stronger. I can find my weak point by this mistake and I can fix my wrong. >> I can find my weak point by this mistake and I can fix my wrong doing or actions. I have no occasion to be ashamed. >> I have no reason to be ashamed off.On the other hand, the mistakes were committed by my laziness are so serious. >> On the other hand, the mistake were the result of my laziness which is so serious. I have not a leg to stand on. >>Correct! I have to keep on trying to reduce this case. >> Correct! >>OR I have to keep on trying to minimize having this case.‘Failure is but the threshold of success.’ and ‘Opportunities are found in times of crisis.’ are my favorite proverb. >> \"Failure is but the threshold of sucess\" and \"Opportunities are found in times of crisis\" . These are my favorite proverbs. I believe it! >>I believe on it!