my homework in 23, Mar

2012-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Last October we swam(to swim) in the lagoon, out where the old freighter had sunken(to sink). We rode(to ride) our bikes to the park and Bobby lead(to lead) us to Bristle Cove where we dove(to dive)* off the rocks into the cold water. It was(to be) late in the season, but the water had not frozen(to freeze), and we wore(to wear) wetsuits. I have help from dictionary. I can’t solve these problems by myself. I need to memorize a simple past or a participle form of the verb. I’d like to go to gym, but I can’t. You know, I must participate in Drinking Show of our department today. I really, really don’t like it. Anyway, see you Sheela, if I arrive till then.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr.[이름], I feel bad for you. I know how much you wanted to exercise but because the special occasion in your company you will not be able to do your routine. I hope you will not be force to drink beer. See you later! T.Sheela Last October we swam(to swim) in the lagoon, out where the old freighter had sunken(to sink). >> Last October we swam in the lagoon, out where the old freighter had sunk. We rode(to ride) our bikes to the park and Bobby lead(to lead) us to Bristle Cove where we dove(to dive)* off the rocks into the cold water. >>We rode our bikes to the park and Bobby led us to Bristle Cove where we dived off the rocks into the cold water. It was(to be) late in the season, but the water had not frozen(to freeze), and we wore(to wear) wetsuits. >>Correct! >>It was late in the season, but the water had not frozen, and we wore wetsuits.I have help from dictionary. >> I had a help from the dictionary. I can’t solve these problems by myself. >> Correct! >>OR I can not solve these problems by myself. I need to memorize a simple past or a participle form of the verb. >>I need to memorize the simple past or simple participle form of a verb. I’d like to go to gym, but I can’t. >> Correct! >>OR I would like to go to the gym, but I can not. You know, I must participate in Drinking Show of our department today. >> You know that i must join the drinking party of our department tonight. I really, really don’t like it. >> I really don not like it.Anyway, see you Sheela, if I arrive till then. >> Anyway, I\'ll see you later Sheela, if I arrived on time.

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