my homework in 24, Jul

My hometown is located in North Western Seoul. There weren’t developed less than another region of Seoul like South Eastern Seoul. There are so many small multiplex housing in my hometown. However there is no public park, so I think we should make a new park in my hometown. The quality of life is proportional to area of green. Ratio of green area in Seoul is less than New York, London, Toronto, Paris as well as Tokyo. In particular, my hometown is occupied by a lot of residential building, schools and public general hospital. There is no space to take a rest for citizen. Of course, there is no public park, too. However, my town is located in the foot of small mountains. Therefore we can make a public park as development for mountain. If the public park is made with various and beautiful trails, some sports facilities like badminton courts, botanical garden, small and gorgeous water spaces and some benches, many people enjoy their spare time in there over having picnic, walking on trail, doing light exercise and meeting someone. It will be make good phenomenon as improving health, and increasing of communication. It is too hard and it takes a long time to invite good education facilities or cultural facilities. But, to build a new public park will be taken less effort than others facilities and it will be the best way to improving the quality of life. It is so hot day today!!! When I went to out for lunch, I felt burning my skin! I’d like to early come back home.

Mr. [이름], We have the opposite temperature. In my place, it\'s cold. I really have to always wear my jacket or sweat shirt. Well, I think you really have to use more sunblock everytime you go out. I hope you can really have a public park in your hometown. They are really important for the community.If ever that you will have a park in your hometown, I think you can render your service to them by designing the park.:) See you later! T.Sheela My hometown is located in North Western Seoul. >>Correct! There weren’t developed less than another region of Seoul like South Eastern Seoul. >> There are less developed than another regions in Seoul like South Eastern Seoul. There are so many small multiplex housing in my hometown. >> Correct! However there is no public park, so I think we should make a new park in my hometown. >>Correct!The quality of life is proportional to area of green. >> Correct! >>The quality of life is proportional to the green area. Ratio of green area in Seoul is less than New York, London, Toronto, Paris as well as Tokyo. >> Correct! In particular, my hometown is occupied by a lot of residential building, schools and public general hospital. >> In particular, my hometown is occupied by a lot of residential buildings, schools and public general hospitals. There is no space to take a rest for citizen. >> Correct! >>OR There is no place to take a rest for citizen. Of course, there is no public park, too. >> Correct! However, my town is located in the foot of small mountains. >> Correct! Therefore we can make a public park as development for mountain. >> Therefore we can make a public park by developing the mountains. If the public park is made with various and beautiful trails, some sports facilities like badminton courts, botanical garden, small and gorgeous water spaces and some benches, many people enjoy their spare time in there over having picnic, walking on trail, doing light exercise and meeting someone. >> If the public park is made with various and beautiful trails, some sports facilities like badminton courts, botanical garden, small and gorgeous water spaces and some benches, many people will enjoy their spare time in there by having picnic, walking on trail, doing light exercise and meeting someone. It will be make good phenomenon as improving health, and increasing of communication. >>It will be a make good phenomenon for improving health and increasing communication. >>OR It will be a good phenomenon for health and it will motivate the people to communicate more.It is too hard and it takes a long time to invite good education facilities or cultural facilities. >> It is too hard and it will take a long time to invite good education facilitators or cultural facilitators. But, to build a new public park will be taken less effort than others facilities and it will be the best way to improving the quality of life. >> But, to build a new public park will be takken less than the other facilities and it will be the best way to improve the quality of life. It is so hot day today!!! When I went to out for lunch, I felt burning my skin! >> It is so hot today!.When I went out for lunch, I felt my skin burning!I’d like to early come back home. >> I would like to go back home early.