my homework in 24, May
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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category – 2002
Country Food/Drinks/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education
Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21%
Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20%
Spain 18.80% 6.51% 1.98%
Sweden 15.77% 5.40% 3.22%
Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%
Below part is my answer.
In the part of ‘Food/Drink/Tobacco’, Turkey has paid most expenditure than others country, even Turkey’s percentage is 32.14%, it is 16.37% more than Sweden which points are just 15.77%. Also, Turkey has expensed 2.37% more than Spain in ‘Leisure/Education’ category, it is 4.35%, the most percentage in the field. In the category of ‘Clothing/Footwear’, the country of spend most of money is Italy. Their percentage points are 9.00% in this category which is 4.60% more than Sweden, but they have just paid 16.36% of expense for ‘Food/Drinks/Tobacco’. It is second position from below. Totally, Turkey has spent most of percentage of their money through in 3 categories, it is total 43.12%. In the other hand, Sweden has paid the least percentage, 24.39%, for 3 categories.
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Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category – 2002
>>Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category 2002Country Food/Drinks/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education
>>correctIreland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21%
>>correct
Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20%
>>correctSpain 18.80% 6.51% 1.98%
>>correctSweden 15.77% 5.40% 3.22%
>>correctTurkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%>>correctBelow part is my answer.>>I have my answer below.
In the part of ‘Food/Drink/Tobacco
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