my homework in 26, Jul

2012-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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1. Are you travelling to Paris ____ business or ____ holiday? a. for 2.Most people like basketball, but ____ my opinion it's too chaotic. b. from 3.Have you read the article _____ Time magazine ____ Google? a. on-on 4.What's that book _____? a. about 5. I stayed ____ the Ritz Hotel ________ my stay in New York. c. at-while Sheela. Nowadays, I’m considering about method of studying English. I got a little confidence to listening, writing and speaking through our class and homework. However, I should try to use variety and relevant vocabularies, and then, I have to make more accurate sentence when I speak and write in English in order to take 6.5 point or more than in IELTS. So, I’d like to you directly correct my mistake while we have a class. Anyway, my today word is ‘accurate’. I eagerly look forward to our class. See you later!

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Mr.[이름], I\'m glad to know how serious you are in studying English and how much effort you put in finding out a way for you to be better. I glady acknowledge your suggestion for our class. Thank you and have a nice day. ^^ T. Sheela 1. Are you travelling to Paris ____ business or ____ holiday?a. for >>b.on2.Most people like basketball, but ____ my opinion it\'s too chaotic.b. from >>c. in3.Have you read the article _____ Time magazine ____ Google?a. on-on >>d. from-on4.What\'s that book _____?a. about >>Correct!5. I stayed ____ the Ritz Hotel ________ my stay in New York.c. at-while >>Correct! Sheela. Nowadays, I’m considering about method of studying English. >>Sheela, nowadays I\'m considering about the method of studying English. I got a little confidence to listening, writing and speaking through our class and homework. >>I got  a little confidence in listening, writing and speaking through our class and homework. However, I should try to use variety and relevant vocabularies, and then, I have to make more accurate sentence when I speak and write in English in order to take 6.5 point or more than in IELTS. >>However, I should try to use various and relevant vocabularies and then I have to make more accurate sentences when I speak and write in English in order to get a 6.5 score or more in IELTS.  So, I’d like to you directly correct my mistake while we have a class. >>So I\'d like you to directly correct my mistakes while we have class. >>So I\'d like you to correct me immediately in class.Anyway, my today word is ‘accurate’. >>Anyway, my word for today is \'accurate\'. I eagerly look forward to our class. >>Correct! See you later! >>Correct!

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