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I think that the leader who was mentioned this question means our president. Exactly we have to elect new president end of this year. Nowadays, some politicians, a few men and one woman politician, declare for election of president in Korea. Someone has huge support of people, and some others are not informed well to Korean. Anyway, when I choose our president, I have considered about his ability, career in government, morality and his character. First of all, ability is so important for control the nation, because he have to decide a lot of things about our economy, domestic policy and diplomatic policy. Of course, if he has no professional knowledge about that, he has to keep experts by his side. In this case, it’ll be useful to his experience in government. And then, the morality is the big problem of our nation. Some pre-presidents in Korea had cheated on money. They used their position to save a lot of money while their period. We really never want to go through these problems again. Finally, his character is also one of important things for choice. The president has to hear carefully voice of all people even if they stand opposite side. However, I can’t know all of him, so I have to catch the true from so many news and rumor. Anyway, I really hope I’ll meet the great president this year. So, I want that he leads that our nation runs toward to beyond future. I’m busy because of checkup drawings. However, I’ll make time for homework. Anyway, see you!

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in expressing your ideas through this. Keep it up! Please be guided by the corrections provided below. Take care and have a nice day! T. Sheela I think that the leader who was mentioned this question means our president. >> I think the leader who was mentioned in this question is our president.  Exactly we have to elect new president end of this year. >> We have to elect a new president at the end of this year.  Nowadays, some politicians, a few men and one woman politician, declare for election of president in Korea. >> There are a few men and a woman who filed their candidacy for presidency in Korea.  Someone has huge support of people, and some others are not informed well to Korean. >> Some are supported by people, but some are not well-known.  Anyway, when I choose our president, I have considered about his ability, career in government, morality and his character. >> Anyway, when I vote for the president, I consider his ability, career in the government, morality, and character.  First of all, ability is so important for control the nation, because he have to decide a lot of things about our economy, domestic policy and diplomatic policy. >> First of all, ability is important to manage the nation because he has to decide for the economy, domestic policies, and diplomatic relations of the country. Of course, if he has no professional knowledge about that, he has to keep experts by his side. >> Correct  In this case, it’ll be useful to his experience in government. >> In this light, his experience in the government is very useful.  And then, the morality is the big problem of our nation. >> And then, morality is a big problem in our nation.  Some pre-presidents in Korea had cheated on money. >> Some ex-presidents in Korea are corrupt.  They used their position to save a lot of money while their period. >> They used their position to save a lot of money during their term.  We really never want to go through these problems again. >> Correct  Finally, his character is also one of important things for choice. >> Finally, his character is also one of the important things to consider.  The president has to hear carefully voice of all people even if they stand opposite side. >> The president has to listen carefully to the voice of people even if they support the opposition.  However, I can’t know all of him, so I have to catch the true from so many news and rumor. >> However, I can\'t completely know who he really is, so I have to get informaion from so many news and rumors.  Anyway, I really hope I’ll meet the great president this year. >> Anyway, I really hope to meet a great president this year.  So, I want that he leads that our nation runs toward to beyond future. >> I want him to lead our nation to move forward for a better future.  I’m busy because of checkup drawings. >> Correct  However, I’ll make time for homework. >> Correct  Anyway, see you! >> Correct