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One day, I had participated in the quiz show which was very famous of huge prize money on TV. Fortunately I had survived to last level for huge prize money, 100 million dollars. Only the one question had been left for win. I had answered to the last question, finally a MC had said the result to me. ‘Well, I’m sorry to you. It was close, but no cigar. Sorry.’ Oh, my God! Suddenly I had been down in the dumps. I had lost as many as 100 million dollars!! When I had turned back, the MC had called me and said to me. ‘Actually, I’m pulling your leg! Congratulation! You’re winner!!’ I had been so surprised and yelled. ‘Oh! Jesus!! Oh! Jesus!! It’s amazing!’ At that instant I opened my eyes and I realized that it had been a dream. I was really down in the dumps. And, I prayed to God that this dream will be archived real. It was so sad story. I’m so happy for holidays. After 3 hours, I’ll be free for 4 days!! Anyway, See you later, Sheela. Take care.

Mr. [이름], Wow! I applause you for doing an astonishing homework.I was so amazed when I\'ve read your homework. You didn\'t just used the idioms in a sentences but instead you\'ve used them in writing a good story. I love what you\'ve done. Although there were some grammar corrections, still your homework was the best.:) I also had this kind of a dream when I was young, but sad to say it never came true. But I never lost hope.I always think that someday, I\'ll be able to earn or win a lottery.Hahaha. I forgot to tell you, I never joined a quiz competitions because I was not that smart. I am just an average student (Hahaha).I just try my best to me an instant millionaire by buying some lottery tickets.(hahaha) Keep it up! - T.Sheela -   One day, I had participated in the quiz show which was very famous of huge prize money on TV. >>One day, I had paticipated in a quiz show which was very famous because of the huge money prize.Fortunately I had survived to last level for huge prize money, 100 million dollars. >> Fortunately, I had survived the show up to the last level worth 100 million dollars. >> OR Fortunately, I had survived the show up to the question worth 100 million dollars.Only the one question had been left for win. >> Only one question is left to win.I had answered to the last question, finally a MC had said the result to me. >> I had answered the last questions.Finally the Emcee annouced the result.'Well, I'm sorry to you. It was close, but no cigar.Sorry.' >>She said, \"Well, I\'m sorry but it was close but no cigar.\" Oh, my God! Suddenly I had been down in the dumps. I had lost as many as 100 million dollars!! >> Oh my God!. Suddenly I felt down in the dumps. I had lost a money worth 100 million dollars!!When I had turned back, the MC had called me and said to me.'Actually, I'm pulling your leg! Congratulation! You're winner!!' >>When I turned back, the Emcee called me and said,\" Actually, I\'m just pulling your leg! Congartulation! You won the price!I had been so surprised and yelled. 'Oh! Jesus!! Oh! Jesus!! It's amazing!' >> I was so surprised that I yeller and say, \" Jesus!!Oh Jessus!!.This is amazing!.\"At that instant I opened my eyes and I realized that it had been a dream. >> Suddenly, I opened my eyes and realized that it was just a dream.I was really down in the dumps. >>Correct! And, I prayed to God that this dream will be archived real. >>And, I prayed to God that this dream will come true.It was so sad story. >>It was a sad story. I'm so happy for holidays. After 3 hours, I'll be free for 4 days!! >>I\'m so happy this coming holiday. After 3 hours, I\'ll be ablt to have my 4 days!Anyway, See you later, Sheela. >>Correct!Take care. >>Correct!