my homework in 27, Jun

2012-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Sometimes, we are faced with difficult problems like enigma. However, some people are adept in solving these problems. Their triumph is consequences for hardly training. Always effort and passion for something gives us relevant compensate. Hello, Sheela. Finally it is Friday today. We can enjoy our enough free time on weekend. I heard that it’ll be rain whole of weekend. But, you know, I don’t mind about that, because I have no special plan for weekend! And then, it didn’t rain for long time in Korea, so this rain will be precious for farmers and trees. I wish to enjoy hearing sound of raining at my room with watching TV. Anyway, I have to attend our team party in the evening. Well, it’ll be also drinking party which I hate. If I am not online on time, don’t wait me. Please, enjoy your tea time. However, I’ll try reach at home on time. See you later, if it is possible.

강사 첨삭

Mr. [이름], I was so happy while reading your composition. It reminds of your past composition wherein I always have indicated my corrections but now, I am so proud that you have improved your writting skill and you have a lot of correct sentences. Keep it up! I will understand if ever you won\'t be able to make it on time. I just hope you\'ll have fun eventhough you don\'t like that party because of drinking.:) Enjoy this weekend and I think you are right that the farmers and trees will be happy because of the rain. t.Sheela Sometimes, we are faced with difficult problems like enigma. >> Correct! However, some people are adept in solving these problems. >> Correct! Their triumph is consequences for hardly training. >>Their triumph is the consequens of their hard training. >>OR Their triumph is the consequens of their extensive training. Always effort and passion for something gives us relevant compensate. >> Effort and passion are something that always give us a relevant compensation.Hello, Sheela. >>Correct!Finally it is Friday today. >>Correct! We can enjoy our enough free time on weekend. >> Correct! I heard that it’ll be rain whole of weekend. >>I heard that it’ll be raining this whole weekend. But, you know, I don’t mind about that, because I have no special plan for weekend! And then, it didn’t rain for long time in Korea, so this rain will be precious for farmers and trees. >> But, you know, I don’t mind about that, because I have no special plan for this weekend!. And then, it didn’t rain for long time in Korea, so this rain will be precious for the farmers and trees. I wish to enjoy hearing sound of raining at my room with watching TV. >> I wish to enjoy hearing the sound of rain in my room while watching TV. Anyway, I have to attend our team party in the evening. >> Correct! Well, it’ll be also drinking party which I hate. >> Correct! If I am not online on time, don’t wait me. >> If I am not online on time, don’t wait for me. Please, enjoy your tea time. >>Correct!However, I’ll try reach at home on time. >>However, I’ll try reach home on time. See you later, if it is possible. >> Correct!

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