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I surely agree this word. If we enjoy having argument with other people, we may get a lot of knowledge from them. So sometimes I enjoy sharing my opinion with my friends and co-workers. Exactly, it is so important behavior and progress for my job, creative some places with people. The architect have to hear a lot of opinion and consider about lots of happens. When I share my opinion and viewpoint with those who agree with me, I can make to my logic is stronger and more systemic. If they have same opinion of me, I have to establish my logic for describe to them. And then, when I have argument with those who don’t agree with me, I may get a new idea about the subject. They will inform the other viewpoint and new paradigm. When I hear that, I can be sure or change my viewpoint. I think it’s not defeat, maybe this change will make me to advance. We have to not be scared about that. To get a new idea and new paradigm is the best way to find me. I am really convinced to enjoy more argument with open mind, make me the best.

Good evening Mr. [이름], I love the word you have used to express your thought. I think we really have to focus with your prepositions. Your sentences were good but the prepositions you have used don\'t match your sentence.Hope to see you later!:) T.Sheela I surely agree this word. >>I surely agree in this word. >>OR I surely agree on this quote. If we enjoy having argument with other people, we may get a lot of knowledge from them. >> Correct! So sometimes I enjoy sharing my opinion with my friends and co-workers. >> Correct! Exactly, it is so important behavior and progress for my job, creative some places with people. >> It is exactly an important behavior and a great progress in my job. Creativity in different place with people. The architect have to hear a lot of opinion and consider about lots of happens. >> The architect have to hear a lot of opinion and have to consider a lot of things.When I share my opinion and viewpoint with those who agree with me, I can make to my logic is stronger and more systemic. >>If I share my opinion and viewpoint with those who agree with me, I can be more logistic and stronger or more systematic. If they have same opinion of me, I have to establish my logic for describe to them. >> If they have same opinion to me, I have to establish my logic in describing it to them. And then, when I have argument with those who don’t agree with me, I may get a new idea about the subject. >> Correct! They will inform the other viewpoint and new paradigm. >> They will give me a new viewpoint and new paradigm. When I hear that, I can be sure or change my viewpoint. >> If I hear that, I can be sure with my idea or change my viewpoint. I think it’s not defeat, maybe this change will make me to advance. >> I think it’s not defeat, maybe this change will make me more advance. We have to not be scared about that. >> We do not have to be scared about that. To get a new idea and new paradigm is the best way to find me. >>Correct! I am really convinced to enjoy more argument with open mind, make me the best. >> I am really convinced to enjoy more argument with open mind,it make me the best.