my homework in 29, Mar

2012-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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1. Ken says he feels like a voice crying in the wilderness because c. nobody seems to support his opinions. 2. Losing that job was a blessing in disguise because it meant I a. got a much better job 3. After saying Beverly made too many mistakes, Bob added insult to injury by saying : I don’t know. 4. The school thought their new teacher's record was as clean as a whistle because he hadn't told them about a. his arrest for drunk driving 5. My friends all called and told me to hang in there after I'd c. broken my leg in an accident I felt depressed yesterday. Our chief of the Audit and Inspection Department who occupies a high position in my company wanted that I would cut my long hair. When he met me in toilet, he was surprised by me because I seemed to like girl. So, he ordered my boss to ask cut my hair. I didn’t understand it. The person who occupies a high level in any companies thinks that employees are just component in company. Anyway, I cut my hair at noon today.

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Hi Mr.[이름], I feel bad for you. I know how much you love your hair but don\'t worry it will grow again soon. I think your boss was in a bad mood when he saw you in the toilet.But don\'t you have any protocol at work?Let\'s talk about it later. T.Sheela   1. Ken says he feels like a voice crying in the wilderness becausec. nobody seems to support his opinions. >>>Correct!2. Losing that job was a blessing in disguise because it meant Ia. got a much better job >>>Correct!3. After saying Beverly made too many mistakes, Bob added insult to injury by saying: I don't know. >>The correct answer is letter b.she worked very slowly.4. The school thought their new teacher\'s record was as clean as a whistle because he hadn\'t told them abouta. his arrest for drunk driving >>>Correct!5. My friends all called and told me to hang in there after I\'d c. broken my leg in an accident >>>Correct!I felt depressed yesterday. >>I feel depressed yesterday. >>OR I was depressed yesterday. Our chief of the Audit and Inspection Department who occupies a high position in my company wanted that I would cut my long hair. >>Our chief of Audit and Inspection Department who occupies a high position in my company wanted me to cut my long hair. When he met me in toilet, he was surprised by me because I seemed to like girl. >>When we met in the toilet, he was surprised because I look like a girl. So, he ordered my boss to ask cut my hair. >>Correct! >>OR He asked my boss to tell me to cut my hair. I didn't understand it. >>Correct! The person who occupies a high level in any companies thinks that employees are just component in company. >>The person who occupies a high level in any companies thinks that employees are just a component of a company. >>OR The person who occupies the high chair in any companies thinks that employees are just a component of a company. Anyway, I cut my hair at noon today >>Anyway, I cut my hair today at noon.

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