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I completely agree with this issue. I’m sure that teenagers who have lots of time alone are easily led astray. On the other hands, some teenagers who have a lot of time with family are surely had right behavior than others. When I had done part time job at private academy for 5 years, I saw lot of students who they were in many situations. In case of some students who were controlled by their parents and family had have good habit and had behaved well. They always did homework and completely concentrated of our class. However, other students who were not supervised by family didn’t do homework and didn’t attend well in class. Of course, if they attended in class, they couldn’t concentrate of class. Furthermore, they used to hang out with friends more than family, so their amusement place was a PC room or a non-alchol karaoke. Always they used to have enough money to enjoy this, because their parents gave enough money to them for to fill up a vacancy of parents. I think that behavior made too wrong way for teenagers. So, I’m sure that the teenagers need their parents and family, not enough money. When they have enough time with family, they can have right thought and good habit. If you have your children, I wish that you will have enough time with them, not with work.

Mr [이름], Well done! Actually, parents can\'t be replaced by money. But I don\'t know why there are some parents that give importance to their career more than their job. Let\'s talk later! T.Sheela I completely agree with this issue. >>Correct! I’m sure that teenagers who have lots of time alone are easily led astray. >> Correct! On the other hands, some teenagers who have a lot of time with family are surely had right behavior than others. >>Correct! >>OR On the other hands, some teenagers who have a lot of time with family are surely had a good behavior than others.When I had done part time job at private academy for 5 years, I saw lot of students who they were in many situations. >>When I had a part time job in a private academy for 5 years, I saw a lot of students who had the same situation. In case of some students who were controlled by their parents and family had have good habit and had behaved well. >>In case of some students who were controlled by their parents and family, they have good habit and behave well. They always did homework and completely concentrated of our class. >>They always do their homeworks and completely concentrate in our class. However, other students who were not supervised by family didn’t do homework and didn’t attend well in class. >> However, other students who were not supervised by family didn’t do homeworks and didn’t attend the class well. Of course, if they attended in class, they couldn’t concentrate of class. >> Of course, if they attend the class, they couldn’t concentrate. Furthermore, they used to hang out with friends more than family, so their amusement place was a PC room or a non-alchol karaoke. >>Correct! Always they used to have enough money to enjoy this, because their parents gave enough money to them for to fill up a vacancy of parents. >> They always used to have enough money to enjoy this, because their parents gave enough money for them to fill up the vacancy of their being parents. I think that behavior made too wrong way for teenagers. >> I think that this behavior made teenagers go on in a wrong way. So, I’m sure that the teenagers need their parents and family, not enough money. >>So, I’m sure that teenagers needs their parents and family more than money. When they have enough time with family, they can have right thought and good habit. >>Correct! If you have your children, I wish that you will have enough time with them, not with work. >>If you have children, I wish that spend enough time with them, not with work.