my homework in 3, May

2012-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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What development policies can contribute to facilitating economic growth with social development? I have no totally knowledge about that. But, I’m going to guess about this question. Between 1960s and 1980s, in Korea, a military government controlled all of economy and society. They could support some companies for development and could remove any companies. They decided to concentrate to heavy industry all of Korean capability. Fortunately, their policies were good for development of economy in Korea. So, we could join the ranks of the developed countries and Korean could no more not concern about food. However, nowadays, any government can’t like that. Of course they can decide the plan for development of economy, but they can’t control all of economy and society. They have to not. I think the best way that government contributes to facilitating economic growth is that design the proper policies which can support many companies and employees. For example, they can lend some money of low interest rate for outstanding small and medium business and they can give good education of skill which needs to get a job to people who find a job. I don’t know that it is real method for development economy. I think what I say is so normally policy which everyone know. I just wish to my government have a special plan for facilitating economic growth with social development. It is gorgeous whether today, too. I wish yours will be, too. See you!

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Hi Mr. [이름], I applause you for the hard working on answering this question. The question is merely asking about some policies that can contribute to facilitating economic growth with social development. But It\'s okay because you have stated some polices your Goverment implement.See you later! T.Sheela What development policies can contribute to facilitating economic growth with social development?I have no totally knowledge about that. >>I have no idea about this question. But, I’m going to guess about this question. >> But, I am going to guess about what this question means.Between 1960s and 1980s, in Korea, a military government controlled all of economy and society. >> In between 1960\'s to 1980\'s. Korean military controlled the economy and the society. They could support some companies for development and could remove any companies. >> They supported some companies for development and get rid of other companies. They decided to concentrate to heavy industry all of Korean capability. >> They have decided to concentrate on heavy industry according to Korean\'s capability. Fortunately, their policies were good for development of economy in Korea. >> Luckly , their policies were good for development of the economy of Korea. So, we could join the ranks of the developed countries and Korean could no more not concern about food. >> So Korea is one of the developed countries and we will no longer worry about food.However, nowadays, any government can’t like that. >> However, nowadays, any government does not like the policies. Of course they can decide the plan for development of economy, but they can’t control all of economy and society. >> Of course they can decide for the development of economy in Korea, but they can not control the economy and the society. They have to not. >> They should not.I think the best way that government contributes to facilitating economic growth is that design the proper policies which can support many companies and employees. >> I think the best way the government can contributes to the facilitating of the economic growth of Korea is to design a good policies which will support many companies and employees. For example, they can lend some money of low interest rate for outstanding small and medium business and they can give good education of skill which needs to get a job to people who find a job. >>For example, they can lend some money of small business and also, they can give a good education for the people to be able to develop their skills which they need to get a good job. >>OR For example, they can lend some money of small business and also, they can give trainings and seminars on how the job seekers can get a good job.I don’t know that it is real method for development economy. >> I do not know if it is a good method on developing an economy. I think what I say is so normally policy which everyone know. >> I think, what I wrote is so normally a policy which everyone knows. I just wish to my government have a special plan for facilitating economic growth with social development. >> I just wish my government will have a special plan in facilitating economic growth with social development. It is gorgeous whether today, too. I wish yours will be, too. See you! >> We have a gorgeous whether today, I wish it\'s the same in there. See you.

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