my homework in 30, Mar

2012-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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How would your friends (or teacher or supervisor) describe you? I don’t know exactly but I can analogize how they describe me. Maybe my friends will say ‘He’s not normal. He always wants to special life, so he wouldn’t get married. And it is not easy to meet him. He always says ‘I’m busy’. So we can’t enjoy together as much as when we were university student. We wish that he’ll live normal like ordinary people.’ And then, my supervisor will say about me that ‘Mr. [이름] is so competent in his work. He never forgives anything and he has huge passion. Until he entered our company for freshman, he has been full of confidence and has made a greater effort. After 1 year, many co-workers wanted to work together with him. Of course me too. On the other hand, he has lacked the sociability. He rarely has groveled to somebody and really hates to lose someone about work. This is both his strength and also weakness.’ These stories are my imaginations. Believe it or not!

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Hi Mr. [이름], (Hahaha) You have a wide imagination! I believe 80 percent of those because I think the only person who can describe you is you. You know yourself and your know your surrounding. For the 20 percent, i think I give this credit to your supervisor,teachers and friends. They know some part of you that you are maybe, not aware off. Well let\'s tallk more about this later. See you! T.Sheela How would your friends (or teacher or supervisor) describe you?I don’t know exactly but I can analogize how they describe me. >>I don\'t know exactly but I can analize how they can describe me. Maybe my friends will say ‘He’s not normal. >>Correct! >>Maybe my friends will say,\"He is not normal\". He always wants to special life, so he wouldn’t get married. >> He always want to have a special life that\'s why he wouldn\'t like to get married. And it is not easy to meet him. >>Correct! He always says ‘I’m busy’. >> He always says he is busy. So we can’t enjoy together as much as when we were university student. >> So we can\'t enjoy being together just like when we were a University student. >>OR So we can\'t enjoy being together just like when we were the Unversity. We wish that he’ll live normal like ordinary people.’ >>We wish that he will have a normal life just like an ordinary people. >>OR We wish that he will have a normal life just like an ordinary person.And then, my supervisor will say about me that ‘Mr. [이름] is so competent in his work. >>And then, maybe my supervisor will say, \"Mr.[이름] is so competent in his work\". He never forgives anything and he has huge passion. >>He never forgets anything and he is passionate. Until he entered our company for freshman, he has been full of confidence and has made a greater effort. >>Until he entered in our company as a freshman, he has been full of confidence and has made a greater effort. >>OR When he first came to the company, he has been full of confidence and has made a great effort to his work. After 1 year, many co-workers wanted to work together with him. >> After 1 year, many co-workers wanted to work with him. Of course me too. >>Correct! On the other hand, he has lacked the sociability. >>On the other hand, he lack socialization. He rarely has groveled to somebody and really hates to lose someone about work. >> He rarely groveled to somebody and really hates to lose someone about work. This is both his strength and also weakness.

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