my homework in 31, Jul
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1. For five years, I have put to going to college.
2. A few years ago, I decided about continuing my education.
3. At work, I was in charge for managing my department.
4. At home, I had to take care of raising two children.
5. I didn't want to be blamed for abandoning my responsibilities.
6. Still, I didn't want to forget about advancing my skills.
7. For this reason, I talked about returning to school with my kids and other family members.
8. To my surprise, my family congratulated me to taking this step.
9. They told me not to worry about being away from the kids.
10. The kids would get used to doing more things for themselves.
I’m not sure about my answers. Using preposition is so difficult for me.
Oh. It’s so hot day, too. It will reach 35c degrees today.
I’m not good condition because of hot weather and Qatar problem. And then, I have to move my desk from TFT office to headquarter at the afternoon.
Have a nice day and see you later!
강사 첨삭
Hi there!Thank you for answering your homework today. I\'m impressed of the result though there were still some mistakes. Anyway, I know that you gave your best to it so you deserve a high five! Keep up the good work and always have time to learn the use of prepositions. It is really confusing but I know that you\'ll do better soon. See you in class then and keep safe! Have a great Wednesday ahead!
~~ T. Sheela ~~~
1. For five years, I have put to going to college.
>> For five years, I have put OFF going to college.2. A few years ago, I decided about continuing my education.
>> A few years ago, I decided AGAINST continuing my education.
3. At work, I was in charge for managing my department.
>> At work, I was in charge OF managing my department.4. t home, I had to take care of raising two children.
>> Correct (But be careful of the first letter of your first word in the sentence)
>> At home, I had to take care of raising two children.5. I didn\'t want to be blamed for abandoning my responsibilities.
>> Correct6. Still, I didn\'t want to forget about advancing my skills.
>> Correct7. For this reason, I talked about returning to school with my kids and other family members.
>> Correct8. To my surprise, my family congratulated me to taking this step.
>> To my surprise, my family congratulated me for taking this step.9. They told me not to worry about being away from the kids.
>> Correct10. The kids would get used to doing more things for themselves.
>> CorrectI’m not sure about my answers.
>> I\'m not sure of my answers.
Using preposition is so difficult for me.
>> Correct OR;
>> Using prepositions in a sentence is so difficult to me.Oh. It’s so hot day, too.
>> Oh, it\'s so hot today, too.
It will reach 35c degrees today.
>> It will reach 35 degrees Celsius today.I’m not good condition because of hot weather and Qatar problem.
>> I\'m not in a good condition because of the hot weather and the Quatar problem.
And then, I have to move my desk from TFT office to headquarter at the afternoon.
>> And then, I have to move my desk from the TFT office to the headquarter this afternoon.
>> And I even have to move my desk from the TFT office to the headquarter in the afternoon.Have a nice day and see you later! >> Correct
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