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2012-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY Essay questions What was your biggest regret in life? You may use the following words in your answer. Remorse/Grievous/Deterrent I’m sorry. I never regret in my life. ‘Don’t leave remorse in my life even though I feel wistful.‘ is my motto. (I think that meaning of ‘remorse’ is more strong than meaning of ‘wistful’. Right? ) I have tried to not make grievous things anytime. I really think carefully when I have to choice and then I don’t look back upon my choice because it is not help to my goal. Of course, when I go to towards the goal, it’s not easy to deterrent of temptation to evil. But, I always try to not remind anything of regrets, furthermore I believe my choice. If I do my best about everything, I won’t regret my life. Thanks Sheela. See you later.

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Mr. [이름], I really love your answer! You are one of the blessed people because you don\'t have any regret in your life or maybe you just handle yourself in a good way. I envy you! I have a lot of regret in my life and I have been thankful that I have overcome this regrets and I always think to move on instead of feeling more remorse. Will anyway, here are my corrections and yes, remorse has a stronger meaning or impact than the word wistful. T.Sheela HOMEWORK FOR TODAYEssay questionsWhat was your biggest regret in life?You may use the following words in your answer.Remorse/Grievous/Deterrent I’m sorry. I never regret in my life. >>I\'m sory but I never had a regret in my life.‘Don’t leave remorse in my life even though I feel wistful.‘ is my motto. >>I don\'t feel any remorse in my life even thou I feel wistful. It is my motto.(I think that meaning of ‘remorse’ is more strong than meaning of ‘wistful’. Right? ) >> ( I think the meaning remorse is more stronger than what Wistful mean. Am I right?)I have tried to not make grievous things anytime. >> I have tried not to be grievous on anything at anytime.I really think carefully when I have to choice and then I don’t look back upon my choice because it is not help to my goal. >>I really thing carefully when I have to choose on something and then I don\'t try to look back on my past choices because it will not help me achieve my goal.Of course, when I go to towards the goal, it’s not easy to deterrent of temptation to evil. >> Of course, once I go towards my goal, it wont be easy to deter from evil temptation. But, I always try to not remind anything of regrets, furthermore I believe my choice. >> But, I always try to remind myself not to regret and furthermore I believe my choices.If I do my best about everything, I won’t regret my life. >> If I do my best to everything,I won\'t have regret in my life.Thanks Sheela. See you later. >>Correct!

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