my homework in 6, Mar
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
Essay questions
What was your biggest regret in life?
You may use the following words in your answer.
Remorse/Grievous/Deterrent
I’m sorry. I never regret in my life.
‘Don’t leave remorse in my life even though I feel wistful.‘ is my motto.
(I think that meaning of ‘remorse’ is more strong than meaning of ‘wistful’. Right? )
I have tried to not make grievous things anytime.
I really think carefully when I have to choice and then I don’t look back upon my choice because it is not help to my goal.
Of course, when I go to towards the goal, it’s not easy to deterrent of temptation to evil.
But, I always try to not remind anything of regrets, furthermore I believe my choice.
If I do my best about everything, I won’t regret my life.
Thanks Sheela. See you later.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름],
I really love your answer! You are one of the blessed people because you don\'t have any regret in your life or maybe you just handle yourself in a good way. I envy you! I have a lot of regret in my life and I have been thankful that I have overcome this regrets and I always think to move on instead of feeling more remorse. Will anyway, here are my corrections and yes, remorse has a stronger meaning or impact than the word wistful.
T.Sheela
HOMEWORK FOR TODAYEssay questionsWhat was your biggest regret in life?You may use the following words in your answer.Remorse/Grievous/Deterrent I’m sorry. I never regret in my life.
>>I\'m sory but I never had a regret in my life.‘Don’t leave remorse in my life even though I feel wistful.‘ is my motto.
>>I don\'t feel any remorse in my life even thou I feel wistful. It is my motto.(I think that meaning of ‘remorse’ is more strong than meaning of ‘wistful’. Right? )
>> ( I think the meaning remorse is more stronger than what Wistful mean. Am I right?)I have tried to not make grievous things anytime.
>> I have tried not to be grievous on anything at anytime.I really think carefully when I have to choice and then I don’t look back upon my choice because it is not help to my goal.
>>I really thing carefully when I have to choose on something and then I don\'t try to look back on my past choices because it will not help me achieve my goal.Of course, when I go to towards the goal, it’s not easy to deterrent of temptation to evil.
>> Of course, once I go towards my goal, it wont be easy to deter from evil temptation. But, I always try to not remind anything of regrets, furthermore I believe my choice.
>> But, I always try to remind myself not to regret and furthermore I believe my choices.If I do my best about everything, I won’t regret my life. >> If I do my best to everything,I won\'t have regret in my life.Thanks Sheela. See you later.
>>Correct!
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