my homework in 9, Apr
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you feel about Wednesday?
This Wednesday is the election of members for the National Assembly. Of course tomorrow is holiday! You know, the most hardly weekday is Wednesday or Thursday, so to take a break on Wednesday is very nice for employees!
Anyway, I had no interest in politics until 2010. I used to go out for play on the Election Day. But, tomorrow I’ll be not. After I wake up on tomorrow, I’ll go out for election, and then I’ll do my job.
I wish to study English in library on next afternoon. You know, while a few last week, I was so lazy. Of course, nowadays I have many worries about the study abroad and my life, however, when I have enough time, I have to study English and make a portfolio.
See you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [Name],
I thought you won\'t be working tomorrow. I hope your country will choose a good leader for your community. I think election day is one of the most difficult task for the society, because they are oblige to choose a leader wherein they are not sure if it\'s the best or not. Well, I wish your country to have a peaceful election.
See you!
T.Sheela
How do you feel about Wednesday?This Wednesday is the election of members for the National Assembly.
>> This Wednesday is the election for members for the National Assembly.
Of course tomorrow is holiday! You know, the most hardly weekday is Wednesday or Thursday, so to take a break on Wednesday is very nice for employees!
>> Of course tomorrow will be holiday. You know, the hardest weekday is Wednesday or Thursday, so will have a break on Wednesday, it will be nice for the employees!Anyway, I had no interest in politics until 2010.
>> Correct!
I used to go out for play on the Election Day.
>> I used to go out and play on Election Day.
But, tomorrow I’ll be not.
>>But tomorrow, I will not go out.
After I wake up on tomorrow, I’ll go out for election, and then I’ll do my job.
>> Tomorrow after I wake up, I will go out to elect and then I will go to work.I wish to study English in library on next afternoon.
>> I wish to study English in the library Thursday afternoon.
You know, while a few last week, I was so lazy.
>> You know, I have been lazy this past few weeks.
Of course, nowadays I have many worries about the study abroad and my life, however, when I have enough time, I have to study English and make a portfolio.
>> Now a days, I have been worrying about studying abroad and about my life. But when ever I have enough time, I study english and make a portfolio.See you!
>>Correct!
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