my homework in 9, Jul
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I think you know that I’m so busy in office nowadays because recently 2 or 3 homeworks were so easy included today. Haha.
Anyway, why do I need to improve English? Where will I need to use English?
They are so important question to students who have learned English. When I took a task in high school, my weak point was always English. (If I had more points in English, maybe my life was changed indeed.) English was not my close friend until when I was university student. But, when I prepared my research trip on Europe and when I met important person in Europe for my research before 5 years, I felt that I have to learn English and I would like to go to studying abroad for beyond knowledge. If I can use English well like native, I can do better role than before in my job and others parts. And then, I’d like to have special experience, for instance living abroad and make some friends who live in abroad. I think it will be so great! I should study hard and pull myself together in order to archive my aim.
For 2 days, from Monday, my condition has been so bad. I think why I have been is the AC system. I’m not sensitive to the heat, but I’m so sensitive to the cold and AC system. So, in summer, I have to avoid wind of AC system in subway and bus, of course in the office.
I think I need to rest time for my condition today, so, if I can’t attend on class tonight, don’t wait to me. Of course, if I am [Name] tonight, I’ll attend on class!
Have a good day, Sheela!
강사 첨삭
Good Evening!
I feel bad for you right now. Did you have a check up for that sensitivity? I think you really have to be more careful everytime you go out.
Regarding your homework. I was about to change your homework yesterday but when you told that you are busy at the office, I have decided to send those kinds of homework. Well anyway, today\'s homework is a little bit difficult. I hope you can have more time for this homework.
I wish to hear your voice tonight! Take a nap once you arrived home so that we can study.
T.Sheela
I think you know that I’m so busy in office nowadays because recently 2 or 3 homeworks were so easy included today. Haha.
>>I think you know that I’m so busy in the office nowadays because recently, 2 or 3 homeworks were so easy including today. Haha. Anyway, why do I need to improve English? Where will I need to use English?
>>Correct!They are so important question to students who have learned English.
>> Correct!
When I took a task in high school, my weak point was always English.
>>Correct!
(If I had more points in English, maybe my life was changed indeed.)
>>Correct!
English was not my close friend until when I was university student.
>>English was not my close friend until when I was a university student.
But, when I prepared my research trip on Europe and when I met important person in Europe for my research before 5 years, I felt that I have to learn English and I would like to go to studying abroad for beyond knowledge.
>>But, when I prepared my research trip in Europe and when I met important people in Europe for the 5 years research, I felt that I had to learn English and I would like to study abroad to beyond my knowledge.
If I can use English well like native, I can do better role than before in my job and others parts.
>>If I can use English well like native speakers, I can do better role than before in my job and others parts.
And then, I’d like to have special experience, for instance living abroad and make some friends who live in abroad.
>>Correct!
I think it will be so great! I should study hard and pull myself together in order to archive my aim.
>>Correct!
>>OR I think it will be so great! I should study hard and pull myself together in order to archive my goal.For 2 days, from Monday, my condition has been so bad.
>> For the past 2 days, starting last Monday, my condition had been so bad.
I think why I have been is the AC system. I’m not sensitive to the heat, but I’m so sensitive to the cold and AC system.
>>I think the reason why I have been in the AC system . I’m not sensitive to the heat, but I’m so sensitive to the cold and AC system.
So, in summer, I have to avoid wind of AC system in subway and bus, of course in the office.
>> So, during summer, I have to avoid the wind of the AC system in the subway, bus, and of course in the office. I think I need to rest time for my condition today, so, if I can’t attend on class tonight, don’t wait to me.
>> I think I need to take a rest because of my condition today, so, if I can’t attend our class tonight, don’t wait for me.
Of course, if I am [Name] tonight, I’ll attend on class!
>> Of course, if I am [Name] tonight, I’ll attend our class!Have a good day, Sheela!
>>Correct!
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