My homework & my hope

2019-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

* My homework^^ What is something you really enjoy doing? I usually have free time in the morning so I enjoy swimming in the morning four times a week^^ Actually my best time of a day is swimming time^^ I\'ll have a enjoyable time to study English with you ^^ I\'ll try my best to learn English especially look at mirror ^^ I teach children now but I feel shy not to speak English well Could I ask you ? I can\'t listen English It\'s difficult for me to listen English Please tell me natually If I can\'t listen what you say , I tell you \" Pardon me?\"or \' Say that again please\" I want to practice listening English^^ I\'m going to travel to Sebu^^ Please let me know about Sebu ^^ I have been to Sebu before therefore I can\'t remember^^ I \'m happy to meet you Thank you ^^ Sweet dream^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],

I will take note of your request. I will tell you about Cebu tomorrow during our class. Have a nice day!(\",)

~Lynn

I usually have free time in the morning so I enjoy swimming in the morning four times a week.^^

>> correct!
 Actually my best time of a day is swimming time^^

>> Actually, the best time of the day for me is my swimming time.
 I\'ll have a enjoyable time to study English with you ^^

>> I\'ll have an enjoyable time to study English with you.
 I\'ll try my best to learn English especially look at mirror ^^

>> I\'ll try my best to learn English especially the technique you taught me which is practicing in front of the mirror.
 I teach children now but I feel shy not to speak English well.
>> I\'m teaching English to students so I feel embarrassed because I cannot speak English well.
Could I ask you ?

>> Could I ask you a favor?
 I can\'t listen English 

>> My listening skill is not good.
It\'s difficult for me to listen English

>> It\'s difficult for me to understand English while listening to it.
 Please tell me naturally.

>> correct!
 If I can\'t listen what you say , I tell you \" Pardon me?\"or \' Say that again please\"

>> If I can\'t understand you, I\'ll say, \"Pardon me?\" or \"Say that again please\".
 I want to practice listening English^^
>> I want to practice my English listening skill.
I\'m going to travel to Sebu^^

>> I\'m going to travel to Cebu.
 Please let me know about Sebu ^^

>> Please tell me about Cebu.
 I have been to Sebu before therefore I can\'t remember^^

>> I have been to Cebu before but I can\'t remember. 
 I\'m happy to meet you.

>> correct!
 Thank you. ^^ 

>> correct!
 Sweet dream^^

>> Sweet dreams!

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